Saiyan Island

Benji · 11-01-2009, 10:18 PM

I decided to write what I might do if I was the writer of the sequel. Now before I start I want to say that I loved Evolution and my script will follow that film. Hope to see some feedback try to keep it posidive and constructive and I appologise in advance for spelling. Thank you and enjoy.

Goku stood in the locker room. Around him he could hear the thousands of screaming fans in the audience. They were craving action and he was ready to give it to them. He began putting on his orange gi the same gi that belonged to his grandfather. As he tied the belt around him he remembered his grandfather Gohan in all his glory. He trained Goku to fight well and today he was going to do him proud. He pulled on his boots and wrist bands and began looking at his hands. He pushed his ki out of his body and made a small blue energy ball in his hands. He was so strong and yet here today would be the best fighters in the world and smiled at the idea of testing himself against them. Goku stood up and made his way to the door. It was time to begin the world martial arts tornament.

Goku left the room and was temperalially blinded by the sunlight. It was a beautiful day for a tornament with a gentle sky and a few puffy clouds. This was also a chance to test out his flight. He used it in battle only once against the mighty Piccilo. He watched as too fighters fought in the ring. They were really going at it however Goku knew he could beat either of them with his eyes closed. He smiled and hoped that there was at least one fighter out there who stood a chance against him.

In another part of the arena there was another young fighter preparing for his match. He wore a small brown robe and had a bald head with 6 dots on them. He kneeled before a statue of budda and prayed for victory in the tornament. He wished to please his masters and prove himself great for in his heart he had a secret desire. Suddenly the door opened and one of the tornament officials walked in. "Umm yes Krillin of the Oran temple your match is up next." Krilln opened his eyes and smiled. "Yes and I intend to win."

Goku stood at the edge of the ring as the previous match was about to end. He eggerly awaited his turn to fight. The tornament annoncer came to the center of the ring. "Ok now match was exciting but I bet your ready to see more. The next match is Goku vs Krillin." Goku smiled because it was finally his turn and he walked into the center of the ring. Krillin came into the ring as well and Goku smiled. He could feel that Krillin was very strong. "Now let me tell you a bit about these fighters. Goku is a new fighter to the tornament and was trained by the legendary Master Roishi." The crowd exsploded in cheering and Goku looked to the crowd and saw his three friends Master Roishi, Bulma and Yamcha sitting and cheering him on. "Krillin is a monk from the oran temple and this will also be his first competition.

Goku and Krillin moved into fighting positions. "Hey you Krillin I don't want you to hold anything back. That way we know who is stronger." Goku whispered to Krillin. Krillin smiled "Oh don't worry I have no intention of holding back." The referee annocnced for the match to start and the two flew at each other exchanging a powerful to each others fist. Both smiled at each other's strength and began fighting each other with all their might.

Meanwhile high above the ring, high above the clouds the Demon Lord Piccilo sat and meditated. His face was scarred after his battle with Goku and his heart burned with revenge. He wore a white hood to cover his face and his eyes were closed. Even though he couldn't see he could sence every move Goku was making. "Fight hard Goku for it will be one of your last." Above Piccilo sat an entire island suspended over his head being held up with entirely his ki. Suddenly the island exsploded.

Well thats the first bit tell me what you think and I'll make more.

pr0digy · 11-01-2009, 11:53 PM

sad to say...there will be no dragonball reborn or sequel.
db evolution was utter shit.
it's been longer than 6 months and still no word for any new project
so it's safe to say fox has no real interest for the franchise.
well, this should come as no surprise. they never did from the beginning.

Benji · 11-02-2009, 10:06 AM

I believe that they will make a sequel. These things don't always have news right away sometimes they take time. I think Evolution was good and deserves a sequel. Even if they don't then at least we got one good movie thats enough for me.

pr0digy · 11-05-2009, 03:01 AM

evolution was good? if you're smoking crack. the movie was pathetic :l
i wonder what james marsters son had to say to his dad about the movie
FOX should reboot or hand over the property rights to another studio that can honor justice.

Benji · 11-05-2009, 01:41 PM

I'm just one of those people who dosn't like to nit pick movies. I don't go this is wrong and that is stupid and this was nothing like the anime. I just like to sit back and enjoy the movie and enjoy the things that were good not just focas on the things that were wrong.

Mr_Cervantes · 11-08-2009, 03:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pr0digy

sad to say...there will be no dragonball reborn or sequel.
db evolution was utter shit.
it's been longer than 6 months and still no word for any new project
so it's safe to say fox has no real interest for the franchise.
well, this should come as no surprise. they never did from the beginning.

Uh first of all you can't say it in a confirmed tone since FOX hasn't said anything about not being one. They made a cliffhanger for teh movie so there's a great possiblilty for a sequel. And if they don't have interest for the franchise then why did they bother to even show it Japan where it originally came from.

assegtyd · 11-09-2009, 02:53 AM

Good news everyone! I've figured out a way to use two different watch / unwatched overlays so now I can add them to the text-based lists. Update soon!

11-01-2009, 10:18 PM	#1
Benji Academy Student Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 4	My Dragonball Reborn script idea I decided to write what I might do if I was the writer of the sequel. Now before I start I want to say that I loved Evolution and my script will follow that film. Hope to see some feedback try to keep it posidive and constructive and I appologise in advance for spelling. Thank you and enjoy. Goku stood in the locker room. Around him he could hear the thousands of screaming fans in the audience. They were craving action and he was ready to give it to them. He began putting on his orange gi the same gi that belonged to his grandfather. As he tied the belt around him he remembered his grandfather Gohan in all his glory. He trained Goku to fight well and today he was going to do him proud. He pulled on his boots and wrist bands and began looking at his hands. He pushed his ki out of his body and made a small blue energy ball in his hands. He was so strong and yet here today would be the best fighters in the world and smiled at the idea of testing himself against them. Goku stood up and made his way to the door. It was time to begin the world martial arts tornament. Goku left the room and was temperalially blinded by the sunlight. It was a beautiful day for a tornament with a gentle sky and a few puffy clouds. This was also a chance to test out his flight. He used it in battle only once against the mighty Piccilo. He watched as too fighters fought in the ring. They were really going at it however Goku knew he could beat either of them with his eyes closed. He smiled and hoped that there was at least one fighter out there who stood a chance against him. In another part of the arena there was another young fighter preparing for his match. He wore a small brown robe and had a bald head with 6 dots on them. He kneeled before a statue of budda and prayed for victory in the tornament. He wished to please his masters and prove himself great for in his heart he had a secret desire. Suddenly the door opened and one of the tornament officials walked in. "Umm yes Krillin of the Oran temple your match is up next." Krilln opened his eyes and smiled. "Yes and I intend to win." Goku stood at the edge of the ring as the previous match was about to end. He eggerly awaited his turn to fight. The tornament annoncer came to the center of the ring. "Ok now match was exciting but I bet your ready to see more. The next match is Goku vs Krillin." Goku smiled because it was finally his turn and he walked into the center of the ring. Krillin came into the ring as well and Goku smiled. He could feel that Krillin was very strong. "Now let me tell you a bit about these fighters. Goku is a new fighter to the tornament and was trained by the legendary Master Roishi." The crowd exsploded in cheering and Goku looked to the crowd and saw his three friends Master Roishi, Bulma and Yamcha sitting and cheering him on. "Krillin is a monk from the oran temple and this will also be his first competition. Goku and Krillin moved into fighting positions. "Hey you Krillin I don't want you to hold anything back. That way we know who is stronger." Goku whispered to Krillin. Krillin smiled "Oh don't worry I have no intention of holding back." The referee annocnced for the match to start and the two flew at each other exchanging a powerful to each others fist. Both smiled at each other's strength and began fighting each other with all their might. Meanwhile high above the ring, high above the clouds the Demon Lord Piccilo sat and meditated. His face was scarred after his battle with Goku and his heart burned with revenge. He wore a white hood to cover his face and his eyes were closed. Even though he couldn't see he could sence every move Goku was making. "Fight hard Goku for it will be one of your last." Above Piccilo sat an entire island suspended over his head being held up with entirely his ki. Suddenly the island exsploded. Well thats the first bit tell me what you think and I'll make more.

11-01-2009, 11:53 PM	#2
pr0digy Academy Student Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 44	sad to say...there will be no dragonball reborn or sequel. db evolution was utter shit. it's been longer than 6 months and still no word for any new project so it's safe to say fox has no real interest for the franchise. well, this should come as no surprise. they never did from the beginning. __________________

11-05-2009, 03:01 AM	#4
pr0digy Academy Student Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 44	evolution was good? if you're smoking crack. the movie was pathetic :l i wonder what james marsters son had to say to his dad about the movie FOX should reboot or hand over the property rights to another studio that can honor justice. __________________

11-02-2009, 10:06 AM	#3
Benji Academy Student Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 4	I believe that they will make a sequel. These things don't always have news right away sometimes they take time. I think Evolution was good and deserves a sequel. Even if they don't then at least we got one good movie thats enough for me.

11-05-2009, 01:41 PM	#5
Benji Academy Student Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 4	I'm just one of those people who dosn't like to nit pick movies. I don't go this is wrong and that is stupid and this was nothing like the anime. I just like to sit back and enjoy the movie and enjoy the things that were good not just focas on the things that were wrong.

11-09-2009, 02:53 AM	#7
assegtyd Academy Student Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 1	Good news everyone! I've figured out a way to use two different watch / unwatched overlays so now I can add them to the text-based lists. Update soon!