Saiyan Gangster: The Si Mafia Story

[Tobi4242]

ok, here is another stab at writing. and say whatever you want about it, just no facepalm pictures. i find them annoying and they take up alot of space. just use words, at a normal font size.


STORY 1:

DISCLAIMER: i am not a member, so this is not offical. i was just bored, and made a little story about them.

In a little italian american village, on a rainy night, in a little, empty, dark, one room apartment, sits a man. he is tied to a chair. over him is a blinding light, and next to him are two men. it is a classic interigation scene.

Man 1: I WONT TELL YOU!

Man 2: what did i say f-west, he is a tough nut to crack:

F-West: yea, but i think a little surprise might make him talk
F-west reaches into his pocket, taking out a picture, showin it to the bound man

Man 1: YOU SON OF A B****! YOU KILLED HIM!

Man 2: he isnt dead, but he will be if you dont talk, IBIJ.

IBIJ: i dont care what you do. i wont talk.

F-West: ok then
reaches into pocket and takes out phone
F-west: i will just make a little call. i hope your freind enjoys the afterlife.

IBIJ: ILL TALK! ILL TALK!

Man 1: thats what we thought.

F-west: shall i let you take it over for now, mid-wolf?

Mid-wolf: ok.

IBIJ: what do you want to know?

Mid-wolf: we just need to know when and were your boss's "shipments" will be arriving?

IBIJ: ...in 3 days, at 4:00, at the docks...

Mid-wolf: which docks? and which boat?

IBIJ: *mumbles* dont know...

Mid-wolf: what was that?

IBIJ: i said i didnt know.

Mid-wolf: ok then. Hey, F-west, can i see your phone?

IBIJ: Miller's docks. the 5th ship. its name is Serinity.

Mid-wolf: thats better. things are alot better when you just tell us what we want.

IBIJ: yes sir.

Mid-wolf: now, remember, dont mess with the SI Mafia.

IBIJ: i wont

F-west: we will make sure you dont
Takes out gun, and shoots.

Mid-wolf: i thought you said i could take over.

F-west: whoops. i lied.



I hope you enjoyed this little dark story.

[Vaimond]

Um, totally love how you left out every King. [/SARCASM]
The leader isn't even in there?
/facepalm

[Tobi4242]

Um, totally love how you left out every King. [/SARCASM]
The leader isn't even in there?
/facepalm

its not supposed to have the leader. and that ist the whole story. it is just a little story of a series that do not relate to eachother.

[Evil_Gaara]

its not supposed to have the leader. and that ist the whole story. it is just a little story of a series that do not relate to eachother.

srry Tobi but if your going to make a story out of something that is already made. you have to go with that group or people would get confused. Srry but you can not get far with a story like this. I mean if your going to create a story that switches around people make it clear at the begining. Tobi i see you want to make a story of your own. If your going to make a story then make one that is just yours. not any other groups or anything just something that you make up yourself.

[forthewest]

haha i love the story:laugh:

[Pixel]

1 thing you forgot, the Empire was made first, Pk joined like 10 minutes after it was made, then 10 minutes later he made the Mafia! He copied!

[Tobi4242]

1 thing you forgot, the Empire was made first, Pk joined like 10 minutes after it was made, then 10 minutes later he made the Mafia! He copied!

hmmmmmmm... i could use that info... thanks

[Tobi4242]

srry Tobi but if your going to make a story out of something that is already made. you have to go with that group or people would get confused. Srry but you can not get far with a story like this. I mean if your going to create a story that switches around people make it clear at the begining. Tobi i see you want to make a story of your own. If your going to make a story then make one that is just yours. not any other groups or anything just something that you make up yourself.

yeaaaaaaaaaaa... i suck at those. besides, i was in a kind of mood that made me want to write this. also, this is kinda my entri to be in the si mafia... hope it was evil enough

[PkAvenger]

1 thing you forgot, the Empire was made first, Pk joined like 10 minutes after it was made, then 10 minutes later he made the Mafia! He copied!

Not really, some of your ideas were pretty general. 10 mins? Lawl, no it's not!:laugh:

[Tobi4242]

haha i love the story:laugh:

thanks man

[Itachigirl2101993]

I love it. Where they playing bad & good cop?:sharingan:

[moonlightangel]

i hope there is more coming to this story it intresting & sounds like a good dark story

[Tobi4242]

i hope there is more coming to this story it intresting & sounds like a good dark story

sorta. i think i might just go with a random mafia. not just focus on the si mafia. but im still not sure. u decide. should i stay with the si mafia, or go with my own mafia stories. YOU DECIDE!

[moonlightangel]

try a new mafia

[Tobi4242]

try a new mafia

ok i will. and i think some people will be happier with that decision. hey...would you like to co-wright it with me?

[moonlightangel]

sure:D

[Tobi4242]

ok, im going to make a group for writers. hold on...

[moonlightangel]

ok, im going to make a group for writers. hold on...
ok tell me when u do

[Tobi4242]

ok tell me when u do

sent u an invite

[Itachigirl2101993]

moon ur lucky:mad:

[Tobi4242]

moon ur lucky:mad:

hey dude, send me a story, and you can be the consigliere/advisor to the head writers. whitch is pretty much the same as being 2d in command along with moonlightangel

[forthewest]

i wanna see tha' next chapter:D

[Tobi4242]

i wanna see tha' next chapter:D

wait, so you want to see the next chapter of this story? because if you want to, i will write it.

[Itachigirl2101993]

that'll be great.

[Tobi4242]

Chapter 2



In a small inclosed room, a man wakes up, bound to a chair

Man 1: where...where am i? what happened...?

a man emerges from the shadows

Man 2: you dont need to know were you are. but i will tell you what happened...

Man 1: *eyes go wide* k...k...King Oroch!!

King Oroch: hmph. your a smart one Itachi.

Itachi: but...but...boss... why am i here, and why am i tied up? i...im your PERSONAL hitman!

King Oroch: yes, witch is why im treating you less hostile than most traitors.

Itachi: T...t....traitor...?

King Oroch: yes, ive been informed with proof that you not only are part of the empire, but you also hold a very high poisition, proving that you have been in from the start, before you came here.

Itachi: but boss... i can explain...i swear!

King Oroch: Oh yes, i belive you can explain to me alot. including the secrets of the empire...

Itachi: *gulps*

King Oroch: whats wrong? Afraid to turn double agent?

Itachi! King Oroch! I would never be a rat for the empire!

King Oroch: What about being a rat for us?

Itachi:...

King Oroch: Not sure were you loyalties lie?

Itachi: Im sorry sir... I cant...i just cant...

King Oroch: then you know what that means?

Itachi: ...it means i get whacked...

King Oroch: Yes. But since YOUR my hitman, it became confusing.

Itachi: *eyes get wide*

King Oroch: *unties rope, and begins to leave*

Itachi: *attempts to follow King Oroch* Thank you sir... i will never let you
down sir!

King Oroch: oh no, you stay here. your my hitman. So you need to do your job.

Itachi: ...

King Oroch: your gun is under the chair. Now, good day Itachi.

Itachi: *a single tear flows down his cheek* you too boss... you too

[Itachigirl2101993]

This great Itachi scared of hie master?! more please

[Tobi4242]

This great Itachi scared of hie master?! more please

this is about the si mafia, and king oroch is the user orochimaru and itachi is the user itachi. not u, a different user.