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Pixel
07-13-2008, 05:57 AM
Creds go to kisa-chanFirst off, let me tell you, this will be one of the most cracked up stories I have probably wrotten so far. It'll be a private Ninja acedemy, where the teachers are all eccentric. The princple a drunk, and the vice-princple is a pig. Akatsuki members, Sound villagers, Leaf Ninjas, all in one shcool. Well how about I just give you a list of the staff.

Princple: Tsunade
Vice-Princple: Ton-ton.

Teachers
Jaraiya - Writing
Kakashi - English
Orochimaru - Biology (I know in most stories like this he's a biology teacher, but hey, It kinda fits)
Saratobi - History ( yes I revived the dead, so sue me)
Asuma - Math
Itachi - Anatomy
Hidan - Itachi's assitant (what, they had to find some one who wouldn't die)
Diedara - Art ( it fits, doesn't it.)
Zabuza - Gym (I told you, I'm reviving the dead)
Gai - Taijutsu (What? ninja's still have to train)
Kurenai - Genjutsu
Iruka - Ninjutsu
Sasori - Chemisty (You'll see why.)

Staff

Shizune - Nurse
Kisame - Head janitor (He just loves his job)
Kabuto - janitor (against his will, of course.)
Zetsu - Gardner (oh you knew it was coming)
Kakuzu - Lunch man (What! I didn't know where else to put him)
Ayame - Lunch lady
Anko - Detention

As for the students attending. Of course to main ones are enrolling. Even the ones who are dead but are miraculously revived (*Bows* Yes I'm awesome) Like Haku and the sound trio. But there are also some extra slots left in the Ninja acedemy's rooster. If You have someone in mind, (I.E. O.C. character) Please tell me via Pm. Tell me their Name, villiage, what they look like, and how they act. Please don't post them on this thread, but instead please pm it. That way we can add an air of surprise. You can also ask to put you character into a certain dorm room with a certain character, of have a crush with another, or maybe you want you character to dislike someone else. Please tell me everything you can. I will even accept Some new teachers, If you can think of a subject have not already covered with the other characters.

All O.C. Character that are currently accepted will be listed here. (I shall post there name here as soon as I can, so if you want to know if your character will be in the story, just check here. There is also no limit to how many characters that will be accepted so feel free to give me Ideas. Just please don't make stupid or silly O.C.s ok)

O.C. Characters:
Caracter: Mako
Made by: Marks
Character: Akane
Made by: Sas0ri



Now here is the prolouge:

"Is it finished?"

"Yes Lady Hokage."

"And the letters?"

"Delivered."

"Good."

"But I have a question Lady Hokage."

"What is it?"

"How do you know those ninja will show up?"

Tsunade smiled vicously. "Easy. You just play off their weakness. All the others will come on there own accord."

"How so?"

"Just tell what they want to know, and you have them wrapped around your finger. Like with Naruto........."

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Naruto walked back into his apartment, then stop. He walked back out and looked at his mail box. He had mail. He also never got mail. Curiously he reached in and grabbed the plain enevlope. He opened and took out the letter. It said.


Dear Uzumaki Naruto,

We would like you to attened the new Private Ninja High School. It shall
brighten your education and make you into a smarter person. Not only
do we teach the basic in education, we also teach ninja skills.
So you will also become stronger. If you would like to join, send word to me,
Lady Tsunade, and I shall give you the date and time to arrive,
along with the directions to your new school.

Yours Truly,
5th Hokage

P.S. Sasuke will be coming.


Naruto Almost jumped for joy. This was his chance to show Sasuke how good he was.

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"....... I just told him Sasuke would join. Then Hinata will come knowing Naruto is coming, and Kiba and Shino shall follow since their such good friends."

"Very clever, but what about Sasuke. How do you plan to get him here."

"Easy. I told him........."

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Sasuke was eating lunch when he heard a knock on the door. He put down his bowl of ramen irriatebly. He didn't like vistors, especially since they normally was Sakura or Ino, insisting to check in on him. He was about to ingore the door, when he looked in the peep hole and saw a leaf village ninja. He didn't know this ninja, but he still opened the door.

"May I help you." Sasuke replied tartly. Even if it wasn't those annoying girls, he still had been interrupted.

"A letter from Lady Hokage to Uchiha Sasuke." The ninja replied. He handed Sasuke a letter and jumped off.

Sasuke tore the enevlope hasitly open, and read the letter.


Dear Uchiha Sasuke,

We would like you to attened the new Private Ninja High School. It shall
brighten your education and make you into a smarter person. Not only
do we teach the basic in education, we also teach ninja skills.
So you will also become stronger. If you would like to join, send word to me,
Lady Tsunade, and I shall give you the date and time to arrive,
along with the directions to your new school.

Yours Truly,
5th Hokage

P.S. Itachi will be a teacher.


Itachi. His long time brother and means of his revenge. Sasuke couldn't believe that he could be so fortunate.

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"....... His brother will be teaching there. Once Sakura and Ino find out Sasuke's coming, they'll immediately follow. And Ino will drag Shikamru with her, to help with her school work, and Shikamru in turn will bring Choji, becasue he'll need some help dealing with Ino."

"Aw, I see."

"And I got that Hyuga Kid going to come by saying........."

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Neji was in the Hyuga's training ground, trying to perfect his Eight Trigrams, when one of the other hyugas interrupted him.

"What is it." He snarled.

"A letter has came for you, from Lady Tsunade her self."

"Give it to me." Neji ordered, snatching the letter away. When he opened the letter, he read,



Dear Hyuga Neji,

We would like you to attened the new Private Ninja High School. It shall
brighten your education and make you into a smarter person. Not only
do we teach the basic in education, we also teach ninja skills.
So you will also become stronger. If you would like to join, send word to me,
Lady Tsunade, and I shall give you the date and time to arrive,
along with the directions to your new school.

Yours Truly,
5th Hokage

P.S. Hinata will be there.

Neji's eyes narrowed. If Hinata was there, then he could prove he is better then her. He should consider going

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"............ that his cousin would be there. See he has this thing with his cousin, and for some reason, he wants to kill her."

"But Lady Tsunade, Would that be such a good idea then."

"Why, Of course, Don't be silly. Any way, with him coming, his teammates Tenten and Lee will both come, Of course for two entirely different reasons, but hey. I've also sent out a few more letters, to some other people who i would like to come. Now to sit back and wait."

Sasori
07-13-2008, 06:18 AM
good one, i love your choice of teachers and what subjects they teach. looking forwards to the next chapter, i might have a few ideas having written a naruto school fic myself.:D

narutofan89
07-13-2008, 06:19 AM
great but why is itatchi a teacher if he is sorta a bad guy in a way:)

Pixel
07-13-2008, 06:20 AM
So? It's just a Fanfic! Plus, i'm reviveing the dead!

Sasori
07-13-2008, 06:24 AM
nothing better than reviving the dead ^^

marks
07-13-2008, 06:28 AM
lol thats funny
Neji>Hinata>NAruto>Sasuke<Ino<Sakura

lol i,ll try to send my character to u
btw post in my thread too

Pixel
07-13-2008, 06:30 AM
Well, how about you become a co-writer of this thread? And delete the old one?

marks
07-13-2008, 06:32 AM
no that one is for fun
btw u should add more abnoxious charachters like sakura or Naruto ones

Sasori
07-13-2008, 06:33 AM
I'd really love to be co writer too, I also have an idea for one or more OCs.
Sending you a PM now ^^

Pixel
07-13-2008, 06:37 AM
no that one is for fun
btw u should add more abnoxious charachters like sakura or Naruto ones

This one is for fun also!

marks
07-13-2008, 06:43 AM
:Dcheck ur Pm i hope u like teh character

Pixel
07-13-2008, 06:45 AM
It was pretty confusing, but he's added!

Sasori
07-13-2008, 06:47 AM
did you get my Pm? and should i send you my OC too?

Pixel
07-13-2008, 06:48 AM
Yeah, you should!

marks
07-13-2008, 06:48 AM
dont worry where ever anyone is about to kiss in the dark or kill in the dark or do anything in the dark or silence or alone in gym
my character will be there and will always suprise him/her---annoying one

Pixel
07-13-2008, 06:52 AM
Haha, ok,...........!

marks
07-13-2008, 06:56 AM
hey when you write your next episode of the story should i send you my character story to you or pm you

Pixel
07-13-2008, 06:59 AM
Pm me!

Sasori
07-13-2008, 07:06 AM
You've got a new oc pupil in you inbox ^^

Pixel
07-13-2008, 07:09 AM
Yes, I know!

Itachigirl2101993
07-13-2008, 07:54 AM
this is great

Pixel
07-13-2008, 07:59 AM
Well then, want to join?

marks
07-13-2008, 09:09 AM
when are you gonna publish a new episode of the story

just asking

chryblossom
07-13-2008, 09:14 AM
i like that chapter, everyone ended up comming

Pixel
07-13-2008, 02:30 PM
when are you gonna publish a new episode of the story

just asking

jeez, I just posted it today!

Sasori
07-15-2008, 05:12 PM
It might be a good idea to post an application sheet for the ocs like:
name:
looks:
etc:...
with every thing you need then it'll make it easier for people and they can get it right first time. I can do one based on what i sent you last time if you like.

Pixel
07-16-2008, 05:37 AM
You'll also need to post a village!

Sasori
07-16-2008, 06:25 AM
Alright, for anyone who wants to add an OC and Pm it too Jebus, this is a guideline of what kind of info he needs, of course you can add whatever else you can think of as well.
Name: (wouldn't get far without that...)
Gender: (might come in useful)
Personality: Describe it as much as you can so you OC can be kept in character. Giving examples of how your OC acts in a particular situation can be easier.
Enemies: Not obligatory, not everyone has enemies, I guess
Friends: It would be nice if your OC had friends, or just give an idea of who they like to hang out with.
Crush: if you hadn't thought of it before i wouldn't add one for the sake of adding one...If you choose to add one, say who knows about it etc...
Favorite subjects: the subjects your OC is good at.
Least favorite subjects: opposite of above, the subjects left over will be the ones your OC is neither stunningly good at, nor utterly useless.
Home village:
Past: If it's important to the way they act they give a brief story of it, if nothing interesting happened then no need to fill this in.
Appearance Things such as height (you can say your OC is the same height as a canon character), Hair color and length, eyes, clothes, and any extra marking, tattoos you might want to add.

If I forgot something, you want to add then go ahead.
I hope the list is ok with you, Jebus, if I missed something tell me and I'll edit the post.
Remember don't post your OC here send it via Pm to IBelieveInJesus.

xXamaXx
07-16-2008, 06:29 AM
omg! dis story just so made my day!! C:
it was awesome
those characters really fit wat they're suppose to be teaching at school!!

Pixel
07-16-2008, 06:33 AM
Yeah, you should join!
Btw, i'm gonna post the second chapter. You O.C.'s will come in the 3rd chapter!
Also, i'm gonna throw in a bunch of characters of the top of my head to make up for almost no O.C.'s!

Pixel
07-16-2008, 02:05 PM
I added a bunch of random characters in order to make up for the lack of O.C.'s!

Here's chapter 2:

Sasuke had arrived early, and he was patiently waiting for his borther to get their. Hiding in a common area, behind a really big chair, he sat. He figured, since he got there uberly early, Itachi would walk right by, Then he could ambush him.

"I know you'll enjoy it here."

Sasuke became immediately alert. It was a mans voice that had said that. He took out a kunai just in case things got ugly.

"But dad, I don't know anyone." This time the voice was girly.

"Please, with your adorable cutenness, you'll have a fan club before long."

Then Sasuke saw them. It was Kakashi sensei. There was a girl behind him, but from where he was hiding, he couldn't see her. Then as Kakashi was about to walk by, he stopped, looked directly at the chair Sasuke hide behind and said.

"Alright, you can come out now."

Sasuke, startked that Kakashi could see him, hesitently stepped out. Kakashi stared at him intently.

"Sasuke, what kind of foolishness is this. Way are you hiding behind a chair."

Sasuke scoffed his foot on the ground, but didn't answer.

"Anyway, I need you to do something." Kakashi told. " I'm kinda busy, you know with getting my class room finished, and such."

"Your a teacher here." Sasuke asked repoarchfully.

"Yes as a matter of fact I am, and It's rude to interupte people." Kakashi scolded. " Anywho, I need someone to watch my daughter. She is nice, but that's the thing. She's too nice, and someone might take her away from me." He finished in a overdramic voice and clutching his heart in mock pain.

"I can take care of my self, just fine."

The girl step up beside kakashi, and Sasuke stared. She looked very familar. There was no way he knew her, but she looked like someone he had known, he just couldn't remember. She had black hair falling gentle around her. She wore a plain black shirt and black capris. Her dark eyes were kind, but her posture showed toughness. She turned to Sasuke and smiled. "Hello. My name is Drakana, it's a pleasure to meet you, Sasuke Uchiha."

"Nn." Sasuke replied scowling. 'Man is this girl polite.'

"Well, I'll be going now." Kakashi replied. He walked past Sasuke and down the hall. Sasuke and Drakana queitly watched him leaved.

"Well what now." Drakana asked.

Sasuke just stared at her. How was he suppose to beat Itachi with this girl following him. He sighed.

"Do you know where the dorms are." Sasuke asked. Maybe if he dropped this girl in her room, she would stay there, Kakashi wouldn't mind, and he still could looked for Itachi.

She shook her head. He sighed again. "Well lets go find them I guess."

He started off in one direction, and she followed not far behind him.

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"This is our chance at destroying those worthless ninja's" Orochimaru hissed. "We shall go and play their little game and when the time is right, we shall overturn their worthless school."

"Lord Orochimaru wants you all to pose as students attending the school to futher your education, but you will actually be spys checking out the other ninjas abilities. Lord Orochimaru and I have been asked to work here so we will also be present." Kabuto told the patient ninjas that surronded him. There were ten sound ninjas enrolled in the school and they all stood listening intently to Orochimaru and Kabuto. They were in alittle clearing five minutes from the school.

"Do you understand your mission." Orochimaur asked watching each of the carefully selected ninjas.

"Yes Lord Orochimaru." They replied in unison.

Orochimaru pondered his selection again. There was that boy Kimimaro. He was sickly, but was postivily loyal. Then Sakon and Ukon. They were actually the same person, but split into and were posing as twins. Jirobo was here, and kidomaru. Tayuya was also present. Then there was Kin, Dosu, and Zaku. And lastly, the most powerful of the ten gather here today, Akimara. His daugther, and the pride of the sound. She stood at the back of the group, her pale skin radient in the afternoon sun, and her black hair in tumbles down her back. She looked so serene, but her golden snake eyes were alert and her hands never strayed far from her weapons pouch.

"You all have your orders. Go ahead and find your rooms. We'll stay in contact through out the school year, and don't do anything to give anyhint of what you were assign to do." Kabuto said. "Now leave."

They all poofed away. Orochimaru glanced at Kabuto.

"Kabuto."

"Yes Lord Orochimaru."

"You do know what your job is here right."

"Yes, To be of any service to you."

"No not that one. The one Tsunade has giving you."

Kabuto winced. "Yes Lord Orochimaru. I shall be one of the janitors here."

"And YOU won't give off any information on our plans. Even if it meant you could become something better then a janitor."

"Never."

"OR not do you job and get fired."

"No Lord Orochimaru"

Orochimaru smiled. "That's a good boy, Kabuto."

Then they too poofed away.
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THE END
of chapter number 2 of the fanfic, ninja academy

Sasori
07-16-2008, 02:13 PM
Nice! Only chapter 2 and already an interesting plot starts. Good job, can't wait for my OC to come in lol.

Pixel
07-16-2008, 02:14 PM
Nice! Only chapter 2 and already an interesting plot starts. Good job, can't wait for my OC to come in lol.

Urs will come in at like chapter 4.

chryblossom
07-16-2008, 03:09 PM
Lol sasuke is now a babysitter, when will all the Oc come in

Pixel
07-16-2008, 03:11 PM
3'rd or 4'th chapters...

marks
07-16-2008, 07:41 PM
Plotting starts
this will turn meven more good now
will my character start with sasori too

Pixel
07-17-2008, 02:31 PM
I'm still incorporating O.C.'s in!

moonlightangel
07-18-2008, 08:40 PM
awsome^^ this one is one of my top favorites:D

Mr. White
07-18-2008, 08:42 PM
what a great story

Pixel
07-19-2008, 07:57 AM
Thx, chapter 3 is gonna be up tommorow.

marks
07-19-2008, 08:28 AM
Thx, chapter 3 is gonna be up tommorow.

yay!:nuts:

Pixel
07-19-2008, 08:30 AM
Yeah, I still could use some more O.C.'s.......

marks
07-19-2008, 08:41 AM
ok i,ll try to pm u
i,ll think of goofy names but u can change them through via pm

Pixel
07-19-2008, 08:52 AM
ok i,ll try to pm u
i,ll think of goofy names but u can change them through via pm

Alright, will-do........

moonlightangel
07-19-2008, 03:12 PM
can i be one

Itachigirl2101993
07-19-2008, 03:23 PM
It's good. Keep it up. Add more please.

Pixel
07-19-2008, 06:09 PM
Alright chappy 4 is gonna be up tonight.

Itachigirl2101993
07-19-2008, 08:46 PM
KOOL:sharingan::chidori::fireballjutsu:

chryblossom
07-19-2008, 11:03 PM
where chapter 3??

Itachigirl2101993
07-20-2008, 07:13 AM
um.... I agree

Pixel
07-20-2008, 07:39 AM
Chapter 3:
Tsunade sat in her new office. It was airy, but plain. It didn't even have an alcohol cabinet. A knock came from the door.

“Come in.” Tsunade voiced.

The handled turned and Shizune walked in. Shizune was carrying a big chair with a fluffy cushion and gold paint. She sat is hastily down to one side of the room.

"Why hello Shizune," Tsunade said smiling warmly at the new school nurse. "I see you have found Ton ton’s Chair."

"No offense Lady Tsunade, But do you really think it's wise to appoint Ton ton to Vice-Principle." Shizune asked hesitantly.

"Way of course it's perfectly wise, silly." Tsunade said brightly waving her hand up and down.

"Well anyway, why did you need a throne for Ton ton." Shizune said staring down at the overly designed chair.

"Because Ton ton’s my princess......... or is Ton ton a prince." Tsunade said confused putting her finger to her chin and looking up.

"Hmmmmm that's a good question." Shizune pondered.

Seconds passed silently.

"Any who. It's time to have the children come to the auditorium." Shizune told. "You need to make the announcement."

"Announcement?" Tsunade replied.

"Yes, just pressed the red button on you desk." Shizune instructed.

"Big Red button?" Tsunade repeated. "Cool."

She move some stuff from her desk and there it stood. All red and gleamy on her desk, just begging to be pushed. Tsunade hesitantly poked it down. For a few seconds nothing happened, then a little portion of her desk moved and a microphone appeared.

"Oh Pretty." Tsunade whispered. Then she poked the microphone a couple times. "Now what."

She heard 'now what." echo throughout the halls and she laughed. The laughed echoed also. Shizune shook her head and placed a piece of paper toward her. It told her to read the following out loud. Tsunade obeyed.

"Hello everyone. I am Tsunade-Sama and I will be you principle. For those of you that have already arrived, please make you way to the auditorium. It is located in the center of the school ground and if you have having trouble finding it, there are maps located everywhere through out the school. Please make haste to the auditorium. I will be there to explain everything, and I will be talking in exactly 20 minutes. Thank you."

Tsunade confidently press the red button again and the microphone silently went back to where it was.

"He he that is so awesome." Tsunade giggled.

"Not really Lady Tsunade." Shizune replied.

Tsunade put on a pouting face. "But I like the button."

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Sasuke, who sat in the back of the auditorium , looked around. A lot of people he knew were here. Sakura and Ino, and Ino's team members, Naruto, Kiba, Shino, and those two Hyuga's. Gaara sat quietly on the opposite side. His sibling beside him. But there were a lot of people he didn't know. Such as some girl with black hair and black eye's, she wore jeans and a white t-shit, she had wierd hat on. He looked at her and said "Are you new here? What's your name?" The girl then said "My names uumm, uumm,... - shen yelled Haruka really loud -! The next people to come in was Zabuza and Haku, and a girl with long black hair, hanging loose coming to an end at her shoulders, and short, she wore a typical leaf village wear, a green vest with black tight pant's and a bandage. Then Neji, Lee, and Tenten walked in, with a group of 2 boy's and 1 girl behinnd them, they were talking loudly so he could hear there name's were Yush, Killo, and Angeline.

A lot of people he had met from the sound village arrived at once. He knew them all except for a girl with pale skin and black hair. A Hyuga girl arrived shortly after wearing a white cami and white capris, and her brown swinging freely in its ponytail. Then another girl arrived carrying a stuffed animal. He heard Drakana next to him say how adorable the little stuffed bunny was.

Then Tsunade came on the platform. She looked around slowly, and then motioned to someone Sasuke couldn't see. A moment later, a little pink pig with a red vest and a purple necklace came to her. She squatted down and rubbed its head the she stood up and face the audience.


"Hello Everyone." Tsunade voice boomed.

It was silent in seconds.

Tsunade looked a little taken back. "Well now." She cleared her throat and began talking. "I thank you for arriving at my new school. I as you probably already know, am Tsunade and I will be you principle for this school year. This assembly is just to organize things. School won't officially start until Monday. You will have the rest of today, tomorrow, and Sunday to do with however you want, but come Monday you will get you schedule and report to class. After I'm done, you will all go with the dorm leaders," Tsunade gestured for two people to stand up and they did. Sasuke saw clearly that they were Kurenai and Asuma, the Sensei's of Kiba's and Shikamaru's team." Back to the dorms. They will explain the rules and regulations of the dorms, and also assign you to your rooms. If you have any questions ask them now."

Tsunade looked around as hand popped up. Sasuke saw her sigh and then begin to answer questions.

The first question came from the girl with the blue and green hair. "Do you have a pool here?" She asked calmly.

Tsunade looked somewhere down front for a second, and Sasuke caught movement for somewhere below. Tsunade looked up and nodded.

Then a boy with black hair asked. "Do you have a bikini?"

Sasuke heard murmurs from the crowd, and saw Tsunade started twitching.

She replied hastily "What’s your name?"

"Shurin Sakumo, Pretty lady.” He announced proudly.

"Well Mister Sakumo." She said slowly. "Do you happen to know a man named Jairaya?"

Shurin gasped, and then clasped his hands, and Sasuke could almost see stars come into his eyes.

"Yes, Pretty Lady. Yes I know of the greatest man alive. He is my hero, the role model of my life. He has venture to where e no man has gone before, and lived to tell about it. He has made novel of such awesome awesomeness and has seen the unseeable. I may have not met him personally, but I have met him in my dream, my awesomeness dreams."

Tsunade slapped her forehead. "Yeah ok whatever. No more question, go with you dorm leaders and goodnight. Oh and Mr. Sakumo."

“Yes Pretty Lady.” Shurin asked.

“You have detention Monday, and don’t ever call me Pretty Lady.” Tsunade said evilly. She turned and walked out leaving Shurin looking sheepishly after her.

Everyone got up slowly and walked out behind Asuma and Kurenai.

chryblossom
07-20-2008, 07:49 AM
lolz great story cant wait til chapter 4

Pixel
07-20-2008, 08:13 AM
lolz great story cant wait til chapter 4

Thanks!

Sasori
07-20-2008, 08:17 AM
lmao i love how you make tsunade act :laugh:
great chapter

Pixel
07-20-2008, 08:25 AM
lmao i love how you make tsunade act :laugh:
great chapter

Thank you, and I brought in the O.C.'s!

marks
07-20-2008, 05:43 PM
Great story
u finally put the O.C im pm'ed u ^_^
btw is my O.C(Moko the annoying one :P) gonna come in chp4

Pixel
07-20-2008, 05:45 PM
Uumm, yes, possibly, I say possibly becouse atm there quite a few other characters to focus on..............

marks
07-20-2008, 05:48 PM
ok:)
i liking the ch3 u posted

Pixel
07-20-2008, 05:56 PM
ok:)
i liking the ch3 u posted

Alright, good!

marks
07-25-2008, 07:01 AM
when is Chp4 gonna be posted

Itachigirl2101993
07-25-2008, 07:06 AM
um....... soon

Pixel
07-26-2008, 08:35 AM
um....... soon

....I'm trying to get the chapter done A.S.A.P but i've been busy.......

Itachigirl2101993
07-26-2008, 09:37 AM
....I'm trying to get the chapter done A.S.A.P but i've been busy.......

K:substitution:

tsukune
07-26-2008, 03:29 PM
i do not know what you are talking about

marks
07-26-2008, 10:11 PM
....I'm trying to get the chapter done A.S.A.P but i've been busy.......

take your time i was just asking :)

Pixel
07-27-2008, 07:01 AM
i do not know what you are talking about

What?

marks
07-27-2008, 08:22 AM
i do not know what you are talking about

you might wanna look at the previous pages

Pixel
07-27-2008, 10:17 AM
you might wanna look at the previous pages

Good suggestion...........

marks
07-28-2008, 06:44 AM
Good suggestion...........

Thank you!

Pixel
07-28-2008, 08:51 AM
Your welcome then...........

moonlightangel
07-28-2008, 01:51 PM
more more more more more more more more more more more more!!

Itachigirl2101993
07-28-2008, 02:41 PM
more more more more more more more more more more more more!!

calm down moon, don't rush IBIJ

Pixel
07-28-2008, 04:00 PM
calm down moon, don't rush IBIJ

I know, I said i've been busy!

marks
07-28-2008, 10:12 PM
more more more more more more more more more more more more!!

Reason ur hyper?

Pixel
07-29-2008, 07:38 AM
Reason ur hyper?

He's on drugz!

moonlightangel
07-29-2008, 08:56 AM
He's on drugz!one im a girl & i been real bored without ur story itachi2.........(dont wanna put all those numbers) have been real slow so i was hoping urs was up sry if im rushing u i just get rly crazy when im bored
p.s. DRUGS SUCK:yell:

Pixel
07-29-2008, 09:00 AM
one im a girl & i been real bored without ur story itachi2.........(dont wanna put all those numbers) have been real slow so i was hoping urs was up sry if im rushing u i just get rly crazy when im bored
p.s. DRUGS SUCK:yell:

Relax, it was a joke!

Itachigirl2101993
07-29-2008, 09:23 AM
one im a girl & i been real bored without ur story itachi2.........(dont wanna put all those numbers) have been real slow so i was hoping urs was up sry if im rushing u i just get rly crazy when im bored
p.s. DRUGS SUCK:yell:

Clam down Moon

Pixel
07-29-2008, 09:28 AM
Clam down Moon

Exactly....It was a joke......

Itachigirl2101993
07-29-2008, 09:30 AM
Exactly....It was a joke......

thanx 4 agreeing with me

Pixel
07-29-2008, 10:18 AM
thanx 4 agreeing with me

Uuumm, your welcome I guess!

Itachigirl2101993
07-29-2008, 12:04 PM
Uuumm, your welcome I guess!

I was kidding I think

Pixel
07-29-2008, 12:58 PM
I was kidding I think

You think?

Itachigirl2101993
07-29-2008, 01:07 PM
You think?

Yes y do u ask?

Pixel
07-29-2008, 01:12 PM
Yes y do u ask?

I asked becouse im bored............

Itachigirl2101993
07-29-2008, 01:13 PM
I asked becouse im bored............

o I'm bored 2

Pixel
07-29-2008, 01:19 PM
o I'm bored 2

Then let's see what's up in the spam center, shall we?

Itachigirl2101993
07-29-2008, 01:37 PM
Then let's see what's up in the spam center, shall we?

sure sir

Pixel
07-29-2008, 01:42 PM
sure sir

Alright then!

Itachigirl2101993
07-29-2008, 01:58 PM
lol lol

Pixel
07-29-2008, 02:19 PM
lol lol

Ok, im heading over there now..........

Itachigirl2101993
07-29-2008, 02:21 PM
Ok, im heading over there now..........

k what ever u say

Pixel
07-29-2008, 02:23 PM
k what ever u say

Whatever...........

Itachigirl2101993
07-29-2008, 02:24 PM
Whatever...........

I just said that

Pixel
07-29-2008, 02:26 PM
I just said that

Oh my gosh, the spam section is filled with oddities, lurkers, and adult humor.......Sound's like a good place for you, Itachi2.....Except that you won't get the humor.........

Itachigirl2101993
07-29-2008, 02:29 PM
oh My Gosh, The Spam Section Is Filled With Oddities, Lurkers, And Adult Humor.......sound's Like A Good Place For You, Itachi2.....except That You Won't Get The Humor.........

Ha Ha Ha Lol Ibji Very Funny

Pixel
07-29-2008, 02:29 PM
Ha Ha Ha Lol Ibji Very Funny

I know, wasn't it?

Itachigirl2101993
07-29-2008, 02:32 PM
I know, wasn't it?

..........

Pixel
07-29-2008, 02:39 PM
..........

Come on! You know it was funny!

Itachigirl2101993
07-29-2008, 02:40 PM
Come on! You know it was funny!

...............

Pixel
07-29-2008, 02:41 PM
...............

Seriously......

marks
07-29-2008, 07:53 PM
I thinkIBIJ should continue with the remaining chp

Itachigirl2101993
07-30-2008, 08:09 AM
Seriously......

fine it was good, not great

Pixel
07-30-2008, 03:47 PM
I thinkIBIJ should continue with the remaining chp

I do the best I can.............

Itachigirl2101993
07-30-2008, 03:50 PM
I do the best I can.............

.........

Pixel
07-30-2008, 03:52 PM
.........

Dude, eriously, I have writers block as of now...............

Itachigirl2101993
07-30-2008, 03:54 PM
Dude, eriously, I have writers block as of now...............

I know how u feel, me 2

Pixel
07-30-2008, 03:54 PM
I know how u feel, me 2

Good to know........

Itachigirl2101993
07-30-2008, 04:00 PM
Good to know........

well sorry

Pixel
07-31-2008, 07:10 AM
well sorry

Why are you saying sorry?

Itachigirl2101993
07-31-2008, 07:13 AM
Why are you saying sorry?

I have no clue

marks
07-31-2008, 07:22 AM
...cut this sorry thing guys
any clue when is new chp going to be posted

Pixel
07-31-2008, 07:28 AM
...cut this sorry thing guys
any clue when is new chp going to be posted

Tammorow............

chryblossom
08-01-2008, 11:54 PM
you keep saying that

Pixel
08-02-2008, 07:43 PM
you keep saying that

I know, I know, sorry people..........

kibaskute!
08-02-2008, 08:10 PM
it must be hard to write fanfiction you have my respect thats for sure. i wouldnt have the patience or any good ideas worthy of fanfic good job

Pixel
08-03-2008, 07:00 AM
it must be hard to write fanfiction you have my respect thats for sure. i wouldnt have the patience or any good ideas worthy of fanfic good job

Thanks............

Sasori
08-03-2008, 07:01 AM
I know, I know, sorry people..........

Don't worry i know what it's like :), people stop hassling him.... i doubt it'll make it come any faster

Pixel
08-03-2008, 07:04 AM
Don't worry i know what it's like :), people stop hassling him.... i doubt it'll make it come any faster

Exactly............

marks
08-06-2008, 09:42 AM
Still waiting.....

Itachigirl2101993
08-06-2008, 11:50 AM
Still waiting.....

calm down

Pixel
08-07-2008, 03:20 PM
calm down

I'm Very, Very Sorry people.......

Itachigirl2101993
08-07-2008, 03:41 PM
I'm Very, Very Sorry people.......

take ur time

marks
08-07-2008, 11:09 PM
take ur time

....just asking,by which time will the new Chp. will be posted

Pixel
08-08-2008, 05:10 PM
I'll try to get in by sunday...........