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Noctisyt
02-09-2009, 03:15 PM
Name
Hayate Gekkou
Gender
Male
Birthday\Age
Deceased
November 3\ 23
Specifics
175 cm, 58 kg, Blood type: AB
Known jutsus\Techniques
Hidden Moon Blade
Clan
Gekkou
Village\Country
Konoha, Fire country
Kekkei Genkai
Unknown
Misc.
Constantly coughing, carries a katana around, Killed by Baki.

Name
Ibiki Morino
Gender
Male
Birthdate\ Age
May 20\ 31
Specifics
193.5 cm, 88 kg, Blood type: A
Known jutsus\ Techniques
N\A
Clan
Morino
Village\ Country
Konoha, Fire country
Kekkei Genkai
Unknown
Misc.
A torture\ interrorgation specialist. Has many facial scars, and "holes" ontop of his head.

Noctisyt
02-09-2009, 03:18 PM
First contribution to Scholars. :D

How is it ?

Anything to add ?

Kamiaiwai
02-09-2009, 06:25 PM
Beautiful, brilliant for the first time. But keep in mind: threads for characters should include 2 to 3 characters, not just one. You can use that feedback post for space for another character, and if you go three, I'll delete this so you can have three characters without confusing separation. Just try to make the characters in a thread have relation to each other (Ex: We've grouped Leaf squads together, clansmen, and Akatsuki partners. Just characters that would make sense to be grouped with each other.)

Uhhh, if Ibiki Morino hasn't been done, he'd be a good choice as another character for the thread.

Good job.

Noctisyt
02-09-2009, 06:35 PM
Beautiful, brilliant for the first time. But keep in mind: threads for characters should include 2 to 3 characters, not just one. You can use that feedback post for space for another character, and if you go three, I'll delete this so you can have three characters without confusing separation. Just try to make the characters in a thread have relation to each other (Ex: We've grouped Leaf squads together, clansmen, and Akatsuki partners. Just characters that would make sense to be grouped with each other.)

Uhhh, if Ibiki Morino hasn't been done, he'd be a good choice as another character for the thread.

Good job.
Thank you, I'll be sure to do that.

Noctisyt
02-10-2009, 01:00 PM
Edited.