SI: S.hinobi I.nvasion

[darksyngr]

So, I decided on where to take this fic finally. Thought a new title would fit it more appropriate. Almost all characters in this are members of SI, but for sake of making this story more a story than a joke, I changed names of the members. Each name has hidden meaning... and not to mention, I would find it amusing to see you all try to guess at who is who. Have fun and enjoy.

CHAPTER ONE
Cloaked in the shadows of their surroundings three young shinobi moved through the massive trees as silently as darkness itself. They moved quickly with a single purpose, to escape. They were haggard and worn, but none thought to stop and risk capture. It had been half a day, and night was almost over since the three escaped the prison they had known all their lives.

Their only thought was to reach The Valley of the End in hopes of escaping the full power of Orochimaru and his followers.

The leader, a young male in his late teens, scanned his surroundings as he moved. He was quickly calculating all the variables in attempt to ensure his companions survival.

"How many do you think are after us?" the youngest, a petite female with messy blond hair, asked.

"Couldn't get a full visual, but I counted six about an hour back."

"I can't wait till we're out of this pisshole. First thing I'm doing is taking a long bath and ordering at least 5 bowls of ramen," the girl stated wistfully.

"You and your damn ramen,"her companion responded in exasperation, "do you ever think of anything else?"

"Shut the hell up, it's not my fault your sense of taste is as dull as your wits."

"Say that again when we get out of here and we'll see who's dull!"

Before the girl could make another retort the leader interjected in a soft voice, "We are almost there. Stay focused."

"How close?"

"No more than an hour, now keep quiet."

The two fell back into silence lost in their own thoughts.

The hour passed unchallenged as the three passed out of the sound country and unnoticed into the Fire Country. None were willing to slow down, however, preferring to stick to the safer side of caution. They all knew Orochimaru all too well to think to do anything else. It wasn't until they saw the glimmer of night lights of a village did they slow their pace. It was then the girl's toe caught a jutting branch sending her tumbling from the trees. With lightning speed the eldest ninja changed his trajectory landing on the ground just in time to catch the female.

"Damn, Miya, it's a wonder how you ever became a ninja," the boy said landing deftly beside them.

Struggling out of her savior's arms, "And I've wondered much the same about you with that IQ of boar, but you don't hear me making an issue of it, do you?" she responded tersely.

Letting Miya go, Yota took stock of their surroundings ignoring the fight breaking out behind him. It did seem that they had eluded capture, and with relative ease. It bothered him, but they were in the Fire Country so they could relax a little. Orochimaru would not dare send a large number after them now, and a small group he was sure they could handle. Hearing the fight heating up to a violent level he also thought it would be a good idea to rest for all their sake. The fighting and running had taken a toll on all of them putting a strain on their nerves.

"We'll rest here," Yota stated in his trademark quiet tone that had the two younger shinobi almost standing at attention.

"I'd prefer a bed with the village just a short distance, ya know?" Miya huffed which earned a slap to the back of the head by Masa.

"Hey! What the hell was that for!?"

"Could you be any more ungrateful?" Masa hissed.

"I was just saying... sheesh," but Miya didn't offer anymore complaint as she selected a soft patch for her make-shift bed.

She used her pack to lean on while she surveyed her companions. Yota sama had been her team leader for as long as she could remember and Masa her teammate. She had never let either particularly close to her but they were the closest thing she had to a family. Miya felt a small tug at her heart knowing soon they were all going to go their separate ways. She quickly shook it off. Not that it mattered. They had their own countries, own families, own paths to follow. It wasn't like she really cared all that much anyway. She was better off alone she told herself.

"Hey Yota sama, where are you gonna go when we go our separate ways?" she asked, "Do you have family?"

Yota remained silent for a long moment that Miya didn't think he'd answer.

"I had family in the Rain Country"

"My grandparents live in the Hidden Sand Village... I plan to go there," Masa volunteered.

Miya just looked at her hands slightly envious.

"What about you, Miya chan?" Masa asked.

Miya suddenly found something under her nail that kept her attention while she fought to find an answer.

"Nope, no family... no village", she responded with false cheer, "which means I'm free to go where I please and make my own destiny."

Miya fell back resting her head on her hands as she gazed up at the night sky.

"I think I want to go to the Leaf Village. I heard there is a ramen shop there that is unparalleled. I want to go see for myself, ya know."

Hearing the snorts from her companions Miya just smiled and closed her eyes. Yeah, that's right, she would make her own destiny. She would become one of the greatest shinobi anyone has ever known. She would be so powerful that no one would dare mess with her. She'd never be a victim again. That was her last thought as sleep took her.


Links to the other chapters
Ch.2
http://forums.saiyanisland.com/showpost.php?p=241335&postcount=16

Ch.3
http://forums.saiyanisland.com/showpost.php?p=252677&postcount=20

Ch.4
http://forums.saiyanisland.com/showpost.php?p=257061&postcount=25

Ch.5
http://forums.saiyanisland.com/showpost.php?p=257449&postcount=29

Ch.6
http://forums.saiyanisland.com/showpost.php?p=458819&postcount=58

Ch.7
http://forums.saiyanisland.com/showpost.php?p=461393&postcount=70

[konoha_shinigami]

I really liked your story, you got talent as a writer, even gonna give you rep for it, Miya sounds alot like naruto, seeing those two encounter would be intresting, i'll post again after i can think up my own story

[Sasori]

You've got good writing skills, and a nice intro there, I'm pleased I helped :D
I really liked your story, you got talent as a writer, even gonna give you rep for it, Miya sounds alot like naruto, seeing those two encounter would be intresting, i'll post again after i can think up my own story

Rofl, nice remark xD

[ProvidenceX]

you're an excellent writter :D

[NaruHina_fan_girl]

That was AWESOME you are a very talented writer I gives u reps:D

[darksyngr]

I really liked your story, you got talent as a writer, even gonna give you rep for it, Miya sounds alot like naruto, seeing those two encounter would be intresting, i'll post again after i can think up my own story Thank you so much, and I can't say how much your review pleased me. I was aiming to make Miya similar to Naruto. TY TY TY

You've got good writing skills, and a nice intro there, I'm pleased I helped :D


Rofl, nice remark xD

Ya know... lmao. From such a creative person like you, I am very flattered you liked it :-p

you're an excellent writter :D
That would be writer... :tobi:

That was AWESOME you are a very talented writer I gives u reps:D

Thank you so much! I hope chapter 2 will go over just as well if not better.

[konoha_shinigami]

You've got good writing skills, and a nice intro there, I'm pleased I helped :D


Rofl, nice remark xD

hmph, i can hav my nice moments, i appreciate creativity,thats all. Btw glad you liked my review darksyngr , its like i said, as an artist, i cant help but be appreciative of things like this,i've never done a fanfic, though i did create a character, i'm thinking of a story for him

[Sasori]

hmph, i can hav my nice moments, i appreciate creativity,thats all. Btw glad you liked my review darksyngr , its like i said, as an artist, i cant help but be appreciative of things like this,i've never done a fanfic, though i did create a character, i'm thinking of a story for him

You'll see why I said that as the story goes on *keeps mouth shut*

Again nice job Dark and LOL at correcting prov

[darksyngr]

You'll see why I said that as the story goes on *keeps mouth shut*

Again nice job Dark and LOL at correcting prov Yeah, it's the big joke around here isn't it, lol.

OMG, I started on chapter two last night and went crazy. I had to actually force myself to put the pen down and go to bed. I'm worried about quantity over quality though, so it may be a few days before I post it. That way I have time to tweak it a few times. That or I'll split up the chapter.

BTW, I found a book of Naruto Art that is totally ftw. I'm buying it first chance I get. And absolutely unrelated... I started work at Barnes and Noble yesterday and you wouldn't believe where they put me half the day.... MANGA section. I was like a kid in a candy store! lol *skips off like a lunatic*

[konoha_shinigami]

Yeah, it's the big joke around here isn't it, lol.

OMG, I started on chapter two last night and went crazy. I had to actually force myself to put the pen down and go to bed. I'm worried about quantity over quality though, so it may be a few days before I post it. That way I have time to tweak it a few times. That or I'll split up the chapter.

BTW, I found a book of Naruto Art that is totally ftw. I'm buying it first chance I get. And absolutely unrelated... I started work at Barnes and Noble yesterday and you wouldn't believe where they put me half the day.... MANGA section. I was like a kid in a candy store! lol *skips off like a lunatic*

>.> ur life is much better than mine at the moment*visits emo corner*

[Sasori]

Yeah, it's the big joke around here isn't it, lol.

OMG, I started on chapter two last night and went crazy. I had to actually force myself to put the pen down and go to bed. I'm worried about quantity over quality though, so it may be a few days before I post it. That way I have time to tweak it a few times. That or I'll split up the chapter.

BTW, I found a book of Naruto Art that is totally ftw. I'm buying it first chance I get. And absolutely unrelated... I started work at Barnes and Noble yesterday and you wouldn't believe where they put me half the day.... MANGA section. I was like a kid in a candy store! lol *skips off like a lunatic*

rofl, don't worry i don't mind waiting if it means it comes out better. can you show me the fanart btw? :laugh:

[darksyngr]

rofl, don't worry i don't mind waiting if it means it comes out better. can you show me the fanart btw? :laugh:

o.O I really don't wanna after seeing your artwork... but, here it is and please don't judge too harshly: http://forums.saiyanisland.com/showthread.php?t=4574

[darksyngr]

Chapter 2 added to original post. I will try to keep updates posted in original post for ease.

[Naruto]

LMFAO, Jiraya can never change. Sake+women.... = Jiraya w/ fun?

[darksyngr]

OK, Ch 2 is updated.

[darksyngr]

CHAPTER 2
It had been several weeks since Miya had parted ways with Yota and Masa. She had yet to travel to the Leaf Village like she had planned. One excuse or another Miya found to remain at the town of Otafuku Gai. Part of her hoped that her companions would change their minds and return for her. As each day passed with no sign of her friends Miya felt her heart sink just a little, but Miya's resolve would not let her dwell on it, besides had she not told herself that connections made a shinobi weak? Instead, Miya occupied herself by taking on jobs as a nin for hire. Most were small jobs, but they paid her expenses and kept her skills honed.

Her current mission Miya found herself trailing an odd white haired man in his mid fifties. Her employers claimed that he was Jiraiya, one of the Legendary Sanin, but by the looks of him and his habits Miya couldn't figure the rumors to be credible. She had spent the last two days trailing him from one house of ill-repute to the next. It was becoming quite bothersome and Miya itched for action. She was never good at intel missions, and everytime she started to lose her resolve Miya imagined Masa's characteristic slap upside her head for her rashness for rushing into a situation. However, Miya swore if she had to endure another advance from one of the buxom harlots she was going to wipe the floor with the white-haired pervert's face.
"Hey, preety lil' thing, you need another drink?" asked a scantly clad waitress that had sidled up to Miya's table. Miya simple glowered at her target making silent promises of torture and death.

"No," she said with gritted teeth.

He was sitting a few tables down amid several of the girls who worked the establishment. He was laughing loudly and drinking copious amounts of sake. Miya couldn't help but find it hard to believe this creepo was anywhere in the league of Orochimaru.

Finally, just when Miya was about to start breaking random objects over Jiraiya's head he stood and staggered out of the bar with two of the girls on each arm. She waited a beat before throwing a tip on the table and followed Jiraiya out the door, forgetting her kunai on the chair.

As she weaved through the busy streets maintaining a visual on her target Miya began to wonder if the money was worth this brand of torture. It would be so much easier to pound his head into the ground, right? Maybe she could tell her employers that she fought him to get a measure of his ninja skills. She grinned widely at her clever little excuse. At that moment she noticed Jiraiya had stopped. Realizing she had moved in too close Miya darted into the shadows to watch the ridiculous scene playing out in front of her. The drunken pervert was being yelled at by a blond haired boy approximately her own age. He was standing in front of Jiraiya arms folded and legs spread like he could act as a wall to keep Jiraiya from moving forward. The girl's had a look of disappointment as they watched their meal ticket slip through their fingers. Miya could hear the old pervert laugh uncomfortably as he scratched his head in obvious embarrassment. Miya wished she could get close enough to hear what was being said, but she couldn't risk being seen. The kid was a new variable that she had not expected.

Miya watched as the old man and boy moved outside the town borders into the wilderness beyond. It did not slip her attention that Jiraiya no longer seemed intoxicated. Interesting she thought as she followed them. Maybe now she was getting somewhere.

"See, Masa... I can be patient, "she whispered to the ghost of a friend.

[Ryuzakis girl1]

hey man u should go on quizilla they have awesome stuff jus stay away frum lemons

[ProvidenceX]

excellent writting style
i'm not to crazy about the premiss of the story though....
your writting is good but this type of story isn't my stye... i'll still read to see how it develops though :D

[Sasori]

I really liked chapter 2, it's even better than the first xD
Keep it up, i love how she just wants to beat him up, i would so do the same :laugh:

[darksyngr]

Chapter Three Was assisted by friend irl. She helped write when mah hand got tiered and exchanged ideas witha meh. She was a great help. Thank you Jess/Fayna! <3
Miya watched the boy attempt to follow Jiraiya's instructions on how to master a jutsu called Rasengan. The instructions were simple, yet vague, as most were when concerning jutsu training. Miya had no trouble following what Jiraiya was saying, but it seemed the boy, Jiraiya called Naruto, was having trouble grasping the instructions. She watched as he repetively tried to form the intricate ball of chakra. Eventually he gave up trying on his own and summoned a shadow clone to assist him.

While he struggled to gather chakra in his hand with the use of a shadow clone, which Miya thought was really cool, she noticed that Jiraiya slipped off into the trees. She knew she should follow the old pervert, but from the direction he was heading she knew he was probably going to peep on the girls bathing in the nearby hotsprings. Besides, something about the boy intrigued her. She couldn't place her finger on it but he seemed familiar to her. Instead, she decided to stay in the trees and observe Naruto's progress. As she watched, she mentally stored what she herself learned about the technique. It was a difficult jutsu, she could tell. It required a great deal of focus and power. She wasn't lacking in either area, so had confidence she could learn it with ease. Naruto, however, seemed to lack the necessary focus. She was impressed by the clever way he overcame his short-coming.

After several hours Miya's mind wandered back to the subject of her mission. She had to figure out a way to successfully gather intel on Jiraiya. Obviously, following him wasn't going to get her anywhere... at least not within an acceptable time frame. She couldn't confront him, not if he really was one of the Legendary Sanin. She had to come up with a plan.

She watched Naruto bury the fully formed Rasengan in the side of a tree causing it to explode. She nearly fell from her perch more from shock of its power rather than the force. She really had to try it out soon, she thought. Then the idea popped in her head. It was a brilliant idea and was surprised at herself for not thinking of it sooner.

She opened her senses to her surroundings and scanned the area for any signs of the pervert. When she was sure he was no where around she activated a technique that allowed her to negate soundwaves in her immediate vicinity. Once in place Miya snuck up behind the very distracted and tired Naruto. As she got within striking range Miya reached for her kunai... and felt empty space. Her pouch wasn't there! As her mind raced in panicked circles trying to figure out what to do next Naruto turned. Miya found herself nose to nose with the boy. they were so close she could feel his warm breath on her cheeks. His blue eyes widened with shock as he realized she wasn't his sensai.
'kuso!' Miya's mind screamed as she stared back at him, hand frozen over where her kunai should be.


Naruto jumped back to put some distance between himself and the strange girl. Pointing dramatically at Miya, in typical Naruto fashion, "Who the hell are YOU!?" He yelled waving his extended arm.
Miya didn't respond, her mind still reeling with shock she just stared at him. She desperately tried to remember where she had left her kunai. If Yota sempai had still been around she wouldn't be in this mess right now, she thought with self-disgust. She was always forgetting stuff or misplacing things.

Naruto began to get impatient when the female didn't respond. She just stood there looking at him with a blank expression on her face. He wondered if she was retarded or something. As his initial shock wore off he realized she wasn't going to move, so he took the opportunity to observe her. She stood about half a head shorter than him, and by her style of dress he determined she must be a konoichi. Her jacket resembled his except for the hoodie and that it was red where his was orange. He could see the traditional netted undershirt peeking out at the neck line, forearms where the sleeves were pushed up, and waistline where the jacket stopped. Her hair was blond much like his with red tips and it was sticking out in several directions from the hood of her jacket. He could also see a forehead protector on her brow but her hair hid the village symbol. The pants, also red, were bound from mid calf down, disappearing into her sandals. Her pants were low on her hips, lower than he had ever seen on a girl... he... he... could see her bellybutton and several inches below. It made his face burn, and he was sure his face had turned at least three shades of red.

Embarrassed, naruto began yelling at the kunoichi again, "And why the hell are you dressed like that!?! What kind of ninja are you anyway?!"
When he still didn't get a response he became exasperated and decided to use a tried and true ninja technique... he approached her and furiously waved his hand in front of her face, "Hello! Anyone home?!"

During this whole time Miya was searching her memory and had finally remembered where she had left her kunai.
Relieved, she abruptly turned waving her hand at the boy, "Nevermind," she said as she walked away.
It was Naruto's turn to stare blankly as he watched her disappear into the woods.
Naruto's eye twitched, '........ how... who... that was completely rude!' Naruto thought, 'How dare she interrupt his training and then just walk away after all that?'

"Hey!" he shouted as he took off after her.
"You can't just sneak up on a guy like that and just say 'nevermind'! What's wrong with you?!"
Miya wasn't sure if she should just knock the brat out or keep walking, remained silent. He was, after all, being far too loud and may attract the attention of Jiraiya. Before she could decide one way or another Naruto jumped in front of her blocking her path.
"Hey, i'm talking to you, Baka Onna!"

Miya stopped, her eyes narrowing at the insult. Using the advice Jiraiya gave Naruto, her own observations, and some deep dark forgotten memory, Miya began to form a heavily concentrated ball of Chakra in her right hand.
"What did you just call me, you little hine daikon?" Miya asked in a low voice.
Naruto's eyes nearly bugged out of his head as he watched the Rasengan forming in her hand. How did she...?
"No one. No one calls me that, " she said, " EXCEPT MASA-C!!!" she yelled as she quicker than the eye called see rushed the brat ready to plant the Rasengan in his face.
Naruto quickly recovered from his shock in favor of survival as he dodged the blow. He could feel the sheer power of the chakra as it made contact with an object. He soon realized it was the tree that was behind where he was standing as he felt the splinters inbed in his flesh.
'Holy Shit!' Naruto thought as he spun around to form his own attack.
He quickly formed the hand signs for the shadow clone jutsu, saying, "So, you wanna play rough? FINE, I'll show you the power of the future Hokage of the Leaf Village... Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!"
He put out his right hand as one of the clones rotated his hands above forming the shape of his own Rasengan.
A sadistic grin spread across Miya's face, "Oh, entertain me, please," her voice oozed with vicious amusement.
naruto balked at her words, a sweatdrop sliding down his cheek.
'Who the hell was this b*tch?' he thought with the beginnings of worry.
Miya just stood there absolutely still, looking very much at ease as she gazed up into the trees, almost looking bored. She waited for him to attack. The only visible sign of her emotional state was the angry emerald green burn of her eyes as her chakra bled forth.

Naruto paused, second guessing himself. Her chakra was green! What the hell could that mean?

One thought crossed his mind, 'Where the f*ck was Jiraiya?!'

[ProvidenceX]

i think a quote by shakespear can desribe that last chapter very nicely

It is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing


now that i'm done reading that drivel, i can enjoy my revenge for msn muhahahahhahahahahahaha

[Sasori]

rofl naruto made me lol, I love how they interact, and knowing what i know i can't wait for them to find out :laugh:

[konoha_shinigami]

CHAPTER 2
It had been several weeks since Miya had parted ways with Yota and Masa. She had yet to travel to the Leaf Village like she had planned. One excuse or another Miya found to remain at the town of Otafuku Gai. Part of her hoped that her companions would change their minds and return for her. As each day passed with no sign of her friends Miya felt her heart sink just a little, but Miya's resolve would not let her dwell on it, besides had she not told herself that connections made a shinobi weak? Instead, Miya occupied herself by taking on jobs as a nin for hire. Most were small jobs, but they paid her expenses and kept her skills honed.

Her current mission Miya found herself trailing an odd white haired man in his mid fifties. Her employers claimed that he was Jiraiya, one of the Legendary Sanin, but by the looks of him and his habits Miya couldn't figure the rumors to be credible. She had spent the last two days trailing him from one house of ill-repute to the next. It was becoming quite bothersome and Miya itched for action. She was never good at intel missions, and everytime she started to lose her resolve Miya imagined Masa's characteristic slap upside her head for her rashness for rushing into a situation. However, Miya swore if she had to endure another advance from one of the buxom harlots she was going to wipe the floor with the white-haired pervert's face.
"Hey, preety lil' thing, you need another drink?" asked a scantly clad waitress that had sidled up to Miya's table. Miya simple glowered at her target making silent promises of torture and death.

"No," she said with gritted teeth.

He was sitting a few tables down amid several of the girls who worked the establishment. He was laughing loudly and drinking copious amounts of sake. Miya couldn't help but find it hard to believe this creepo was anywhere in the league of Orochimaru.

Finally, just when Miya was about to start breaking random objects over Jiraiya's head he stood and staggered out of the bar with two of the girls on each arm. She waited a beat before throwing a tip on the table and followed Jiraiya out the door, forgetting her kunai on the chair.

As she weaved through the busy streets maintaining a visual on her target Miya began to wonder if the money was worth this brand of torture. It would be so much easier to pound his head into the ground, right? Maybe she could tell her employers that she fought him to get a measure of his ninja skills. She grinned widely at her clever little excuse. At that moment she noticed Jiraiya had stopped. Realizing she had moved in too close Miya darted into the shadows to watch the ridiculous scene playing out in front of her. The drunken pervert was being yelled at by a blond haired boy approximately her own age. He was standing in front of Jiraiya arms folded and legs spread like he could act as a wall to keep Jiraiya from moving forward. The girl's had a look of disappointment as they watched their meal ticket slip through their fingers. Miya could hear the old pervert laugh uncomfortably as he scratched his head in obvious embarrassment. Miya wished she could get close enough to hear what was being said, but she couldn't risk being seen. The kid was a new variable that she had not expected.

Miya watched as the old man and boy moved outside the town borders into the wilderness beyond. It did not slip her attention that Jiraiya no longer seemed intoxicated. Interesting she thought as she followed them. Maybe now she was getting somewhere.

"See, Masa... I can be patient, "she whispered to the ghost of a friend.

you put naruto in the story huh? once again i'm impressed, intresting to see where this will lead, i'm kinda not sure if i should post my story, i'm more of an artist than a writer

[konoha_shinigami]

Chapter Three Was assisted by friend irl. She helped write when mah hand got tiered and exchanged ideas witha meh. She was a great help. Thank you Jess/Fayna! <3
Miya watched the boy attempt to follow Jiraiya's instructions on how to master a jutsu called Rasengan. The instructions were simple, yet vague, as most were when concerning jutsu training. Miya had no trouble following what Jiraiya was saying, but it seemed the boy, Jiraiya called Naruto, was having trouble grasping the instructions. She watched as he repetively tried to form the intricate ball of chakra. Eventually he gave up trying on his own and summoned a shadow clone to assist him.

While he struggled to gather chakra in his hand with the use of a shadow clone, which Miya thought was really cool, she noticed that Jiraiya slipped off into the trees. She knew she should follow the old pervert, but from the direction he was heading she knew he was probably going to peep on the girls bathing in the nearby hotsprings. Besides, something about the boy intrigued her. She couldn't place her finger on it but he seemed familiar to her. Instead, she decided to stay in the trees and observe Naruto's progress. As she watched, she mentally stored what she herself learned about the technique. It was a difficult jutsu, she could tell. It required a great deal of focus and power. She wasn't lacking in either area, so had confidence she could learn it with ease. Naruto, however, seemed to lack the necessary focus. She was impressed by the clever way he overcame his short-coming.

After several hours Miya's mind wandered back to the subject of her mission. She had to figure out a way to successfully gather intel on Jiraiya. Obviously, following him wasn't going to get her anywhere... at least not within an acceptable time frame. She couldn't confront him, not if he really was one of the Legendary Sanin. She had to come up with a plan.

She watched Naruto bury the fully formed Rasengan in the side of a tree causing it to explode. She nearly fell from her perch more from shock of its power rather than the force. She really had to try it out soon, she thought. Then the idea popped in her head. It was a brilliant idea and was surprised at herself for not thinking of it sooner.

She opened her senses to her surroundings and scanned the area for any signs of the pervert. When she was sure he was no where around she activated a technique that allowed her to negate soundwaves in her immediate vicinity. Once in place Miya snuck up behind the very distracted and tired Naruto. As she got within striking range Miya reached for her kunai... and felt empty space. Her pouch wasn't there! As her mind raced in panicked circles trying to figure out what to do next Naruto turned. Miya found herself nose to nose with the boy. they were so close she could feel his warm breath on her cheeks. His blue eyes widened with shock as he realized she wasn't his sensai.
'kuso!' Miya's mind screamed as she stared back at him, hand frozen over where her kunai should be.


Naruto jumped back to put some distance between himself and the strange girl. Pointing dramatically at Miya, in typical Naruto fashion, "Who the hell are YOU!?" He yelled waving his extended arm.
Miya didn't respond, her mind still reeling with shock she just stared at him. She desperately tried to remember where she had left her kunai. If Yota sempai had still been around she wouldn't be in this mess right now, she thought with self-disgust. She was always forgetting stuff or misplacing things.

Naruto began to get impatient when the female didn't respond. She just stood there looking at him with a blank expression on her face. He wondered if she was retarded or something. As his initial shock wore off he realized she wasn't going to move, so he took the opportunity to observe her. She stood about half a head shorter than him, and by her style of dress he determined she must be a konoichi. Her jacket resembled his except for the hoodie and that it was red where his was orange. He could see the traditional netted undershirt peeking out at the neck line, forearms where the sleeves were pushed up, and waistline where the jacket stopped. Her hair was blond much like his with red tips and it was sticking out in several directions from the hood of her jacket. He could also see a forehead protector on her brow but her hair hid the village symbol. The pants, also red, were bound from mid calf down, disappearing into her sandals. Her pants were low on her hips, lower than he had ever seen on a girl... he... he... could see her bellybutton and several inches below. It made his face burn, and he was sure his face had turned at least three shades of red.

Embarrassed, naruto began yelling at the kunoichi again, "And why the hell are you dressed like that!?! What kind of ninja are you anyway?!"
When he still didn't get a response he became exasperated and decided to use a tried and true ninja technique... he approached her and furiously waved his hand in front of her face, "Hello! Anyone home?!"

During this whole time Miya was searching her memory and had finally remembered where she had left her kunai.
Relieved, she abruptly turned waving her hand at the boy, "Nevermind," she said as she walked away.
It was Naruto's turn to stare blankly as he watched her disappear into the woods.
Naruto's eye twitched, '........ how... who... that was completely rude!' Naruto thought, 'How dare she interrupt his training and then just walk away after all that?'

"Hey!" he shouted as he took off after her.
"You can't just sneak up on a guy like that and just say 'nevermind'! What's wrong with you?!"
Miya wasn't sure if she should just knock the brat out or keep walking, remained silent. He was, after all, being far too loud and may attract the attention of Jiraiya. Before she could decide one way or another Naruto jumped in front of her blocking her path.
"Hey, i'm talking to you, Baka Onna!"

Miya stopped, her eyes narrowing at the insult. Using the advice Jiraiya gave Naruto, and her own observations Miya began to form a heavily concentrated ball of Chakra in her right hand.
"What did you just call me, you little hine daikon?" Miya asked in a low voice.
Naruto's eyes nearly bugged out of his head as he watched the Rasengan forming in her hand. How did she...?
"No one. No one calls me that, " she said, " EXCEPT MASA-C!!!" she yelled as she quicker than the eye called see rushed the brat ready to plant the Rasengan in his face.
Naruto quickly recovered from his shock in favor of survival as he dodged the blow. He could feel the sheer power of the chakra as it made contact with an object. He soon realized it was the tree that was behind where he was standing as he felt the splinters inbed in his flesh.
'Holy Shit!' Naruto thought as he spun around to form his own attack.
He quickly formed the hand signs for the shadow clone jutsu, saying, "So, you wanna play rough? FINE, I'll show you the power of the future Hokage of the Leaf Village... Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!"
He put out his right hand as one of the clones rotated his hands above forming the shape of his own Rasengan.
A sadistic grin spread across Miya's face, "Oh, entertain me, please," her voice oozed with vicious amusement.
naruto balked at her words, a sweatdrop sliding down his cheek.
'Who the hell was this *****?' he thought with the beginnings of worry.
Miya just stood there absolutely still, looking very much at ease as she gazed up into the trees, almost looking bored. She waited for him to attack. The only visible sign of her emotional state was the angry emerald green burn of her chakra.

Naruto paused, second guessing himself. Her chakra was green! What the hell could that mean?

One thought crossed his mind, 'Where the **** was Jiraiya?!'

miya's damn powerfull, should she be able to master rasengan that quickly i mean its the 4th's technique and she got it right first try, dont you think you're makin her a little too powerfull

[darksyngr]

Chapter Four

Naruto didn't have much time to consider his options. Even though the girl was still as a statue, he had enough experience to know that looks could be deceiving. He had to figure out what he was going to do without Jiraiya around to help him, and he had to do it quick. Unfortunately, Naruto couldn't think of anything at the moment, but one thing was certain. Naruto Uzumaki never backed down from a fight.

He narrowed his eyes with determination, "she may be a better ninja than me, but..."

"I am Naruto Uzumaki, and I won't lose to a Loser like you!"

Miya blinked, taken aback by his exclamation. Did he really just say that? Who did this kid think he was? Hell, she snuck up on him with ease, and now he thinks he can take her on? Miya was almost certain Naruto must have been dropped on his head one too many times.

Before she could think of anything to say, five of Naruto's clones rushed her. Two came in low on either side of her, one straight on, another from behind, and the last from above. Miya's movements were fluid and effortless as she deflected and side stepped the attacks. She easily slid past each of Naruto's blows, her hands moved with wicked speed slapping his wrists out of the way before his punches could land, her legs moved in quick and powerful sideward blows that was rivaled only by the speed of her hands. Her body moved with the grace of a dancer and the deadly precision of a sharpened blade, and within the span of a breath she had sent the clones up in a cloud of smoke.

As Naruto moved in he couldn't help but compare her speed to Sasuke. Using the smoke as cover to get in close with a newly formed Rasengan in his hand, Naruto swung his arm around toward her face. Miya arched backward as his hand passed mere inches from her forehead. The sheer power of the Rasengan's charge blew back her hood revealing her face and the symbol on her forehead protector.

Naruto's shock was absolute. The symbol was that of a musical note from the Hidden Sound Village. Then his thoughts turned to Sasuke; she knew where he was!

Miya rubbed her nose still feeling the tingle of the deadly chakra that had passed in front of her face. That was a close call.

"Where is he?!" Naruto had her collar clenched in his fists, and was lifting her so his face was mere inches from hers.

"You know you almost actually hit me with that thing," she said, with her hand still on her nose. Miya didn't seem at all concerned with her situation, even as Naruto's eyes turned red.

"Where... is... he?" Naruto growled, repeating himself.

She tilted her head to the side sizing him up with one eye, her curiosity aroused.

"Where is who?"

"Where is Sasuke?! Where are you keeping him?" Naruto all but screamed as he pulled her off the ground more till she was on the tip of her toes.

She had absolutely no idea what this kid was talking about and contemplated messing with him a little, but she knew the sounds of the fight would have Jiraiya arriving any minute.

"I don't know who you are talking about, but you need to let me go now," she responded as she grabbed onto Naruto's forearms. She used her chakra to cause his muscles to spasm and effectively releasing her. Miya quickly moved out of arms reach.

"We're going to have to finish this some other time, kid, I have some other matters to attend to.

As she spoke Naruto's face suddenly turned to a wicked grin as he looked past her.

She knew immediately the reason for the sudden change in Naruto.

"Ah, damn, " she thought before her world went black.

[narutofandude]

i love this fanfic marry me plz.......is miya a jinchuuriki?

[konoha_shinigami]

0.0 u havent answered me

[darksyngr]

i love this fanfic marry me plz.......is miya a jinchuuriki?

0.0 u havent answered me

I have a reason for not answering questions like these. Because it spoils later events in the story. I don't do things without a reason.

You'll be happy to know, Konoha, that your question gets answered in this next chapter.

[darksyngr]

Chapter Five
Jiraiya knelt over the girl he just knocked out. He was uncharacteristically solemn as he gently swept aside her bangs from her face. Jiraiya looked at her forehead protector that now bore a jagged scorch mark across it's center. Jiraiya swore under his breath.

"Why were you two fighting, Naruto?" He asked still trying to make sense of it all; finding Miya still alive, and wearing Orochimaru's symbol.

"Well... um... she... I," Naruto scratched his head trying to come up with an answer. How was he supposed to explain that the fight started over him calling her a stupid woman? Instead, he grasped onto one detail and responded, "She used the Rasengan on me!"

Jiraiya's reaction wasn't what Naruto was expecting.
"She did, did she?" A soft smile spread across Jiraiya's face, "Were you trying to come home to us, Miya-chan?" he asked the unconscious girl as he lifted her of the ground.

"Come home?!" Naruto yelled understanding the turn of events less and less, "What the hell are you talk about, Pervy Sage?! What's going on... who is she?!"

Jiraiya began to walk back to the village, "I'll explain when we get to the hotel. It's a long story."


Dreams of the Past
The man was wearing black slacks and little else. His hard disciplined body glistened with sweat, and his blond hair was plastered to his face as he worked on his technique with relentless determination. With every movement each toned muscle rippled and danced under his perfect control. Any woman who happened upon such a scene would have likely swooned at the sight. However, to the four year old girl watching from behind the tree his sex appeal held no interest. All she knew was that he was a giant of a man (to her four year old eyes), and the best ninja in all the five countries. At least that was her opinion. Never mind that she was absolutely right in her thinking.

The little girl looked up to him like he were a golden god and as she watched the ball of chakra form in his hand her beliefs were only re-affirmed. She watched as he struggled to put another force into the ball, but unable to do so. This did not diminish her awe in any way. Even as young as she was she understood the difficulty of this technique he was using. As far as she was concerned if anyone could accomplish this technique of his, he could.

Moments passed when he finally stopped to rest. As he sat down on a nearby rock he spoke, "Miya chan, what are you doing hiding back there? Shouldn't you be at school?"

Knowing that she was discovered there was no point in hiding anymore so she stepped out and boldly approached the Hokage.

"School's boring, and I already know how to do everything they're teaching," she complained hoping her plight would soften him so he'd let her stay. Unable to meet his gaze Miya kicked a pebble with her toe. “Of course, they don’t know that because then everyone would pick on me. Then I would have to beat them up, then dad would get made and tell you on me, then you would be mad at me too, and I would be in sooo much trouble. I don’t ever want to get in trouble with you. So I snuck out the window.”

She didn't see his eye's dancing with amusement as she gave her excuse, much to his relief. He knew he had to be stern with her.

"Is that so?"

Seeing a lecture coming Miya climbed onto the Hokage's lap and gave him the most pitiful look she could muster, "It's true! Besides the other kids pick on me anyway! Can I please stay here with you today, Hokage-san?" she begged using his proper title, "I promise to be quiet, and I won't miss school for a WHOLE month!"

The young hokage began to shake a little, his control steadily slipping.

"A whole month, huh?"

She nodded emphatically, "Umhum, a whole month... straight."

"And how do you suppose your father would feel about that?"

Miya's eyes grew wide with horror at the thought of her father finding out that she had skipped school... again.

"Two months then?!" she cried out wrapping her arms around his waist and burying her head in his side. "Please don't tell papa, he'll be ssoooo mad!"

The Hokage slapped his hand over his face, and held it there. He desperately tried to regain his composer as his laughter threatened to escape. "She really knew how to work a grown-up," he thought.

When he pulled his hand away he was composed again. He took Miya and placed her on the ground before him.

"I will make you a deal, Miya-chan, " he said injecting a stern tone in his voice.

A deal meant evading trouble, so Miya shook her head in eager agreement.

"You can stay with me today and I won't tell on you, BUT, you have to promise to never ever skip school again, and train really hard with me today. A ninja from the Leaf Village always does their best! You understand?"

Miya's stomach flip-flopped. That was like the worst deal ever! However, she worshipped him, and he was going to let her stay; that had to count for something.

"Hai! Ok! Deal!" she finally agreed her smile lighting up her whole face.

"So... what was that technique you were doing, Uncle?"

Minato finally allowed himself to smile, "I call it the Rasengan."

[darksyngr]

i love this fanfic marry me plz.......is miya a jinchuuriki?


PS: thank youz very much :) I hope I can continue to keep it as good, if not better, as time goes on, lol.

[Sasori]

That was great, as usual your description skills are awesome and you keep everyone in character.
and young Miya is soo cute <3

ps: get off invisible mod my messages keep bouncing back xD

[Xanathar]

Excellent story telling, as always.

[Suicidal-kun]

Told you the other day I'd get it read and I did.http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h97/Fair_One_Of_The_Last_Dusk/Miscellaneous/Cute%20Smilies/Kitsune%20Smilies/Fox48.gif

Now I am an official fan of this fic!:niceguy: XD

I really like your writing style, much better than my own, I must say. Now that I know you're so good, I would hound you for ways to make me better like I somewhat did earlier today. lol

The only thing I found somewhat curious is why Naruto was so anxious about Sasuke in Chapter four. Not sure if you recall, but if you are going by the storyline of the manga, which it seems you are, then at the time that Naruto was learning Rasengan, Sasuke was still in Konoha and not with Orochimaru, yet. Thus making his outburst odd and perplexing. That is of course implying that you are following the storyline of the manga while throwing your own twist into it.

[narutofandude]

u said miya is 12 but in the flashback she was 4 and she was talking to the 4rth but thats impossible because the 4rth died 12 years ago


im still a fan but whats with the messed up timeline XD

[Suicidal-kun]

u said miya is 12 but in the flashback she was 4 and she was talking to the 4rth but thats impossible because the 4rth died 12 years ago


im still a fan but whats with the messed up timeline XDI don't believe she ever gave an age for Miyah, only saying that Miyah thought that Naruto was around her age, right? I'm not completely 100% sure about this, though. XD

[konoha_shinigami]

Chapter Five

Jiraiya knelt over the girl he just knocked out. He was uncharacteristically solemn as he gently swept aside her bangs from her face. Jiraiya looked at her forehead protector that now bore a jagged scorch mark across it's center. Jiraiya swore under his breath.

"Why were you two fighting, Naruto?" He asked still trying to make sense of it all; finding Miya still alive, and wearing Orochimaru's symbol.

"Well... um... she... I," Naruto scratched his head trying to come up with an answer. How was he supposed to explain that the fight started over him calling her a stupid woman? Instead, he grasped onto one detail and responded, "She used the Rasengan on me!"

Jiraiya's reaction wasn't what Naruto was expecting.
"She did, did she?" A soft smile spread across Jiraiya's face, "Were you trying to come home to us, Miya-chan?" he asked the unconscious girl as he lifted her of the ground.

"Come home?!" Naruto yelled understanding the turn of events less and less, "What the hell are you talk about, Pervy Sage?! What's going on... who is she?!"

Jiraiya began to walk back to the village, "I'll explain when we get to the hotel. It's a long story."



Dreams of the Past
The man was wearing black slacks and little else. His hard disciplined body glistened with sweat, and his blond hair was plastered to his face as he worked on his technique with relentless determination. Any woman who happened upon such a scene would have likely swooned at the sight. However, to the four year old girl watching from behind the tree his sex appeal held no interest. All she knew was that he was a giant of a man (to her four year old eyes), and the best ninja in all the five countries. At least that was her opinion.

The little girl looked up to him like he were a golden god, and as she watched the ball of chakra form in his hand her beliefs were only re-affirmed.

Moments passed when he finally stopped to rest. As he sat down on a nearby rock he spoke,
"Miya chan, what are you doing hiding back there? Shouldn't you be at school?"

Knowing that she was discovered there was no point in hiding anymore so she stepped out and boldly approached the Hokage.

"School's boring, and I already know how to do everything they're teaching," she complained hoping her plight would soften him so he'd let her stay. Unable to meet his gaze Miya kicked a pebble with her toe.

She didn't see his eye's dancing with amusement as she gave her excuse, much to his relief. He knew he had to be stern with her.

"Have you now?"

Seeing a lecture coming Miya climbed onto the Hokage's lap and gave him the most pitiful look she could muster, "It's true! besides the other kids pick on me! Can I please stay here with you today, Hokage-san?" she begged using his proper title, "I promise to be quiet, and I won't miss school for a WHOLE month!"

The young hokage began to shake a little, his control steadily slipping.

"A whole month, huh?"

She nodded emphatically, "Umhum, a whole month... straight."

"And how do you suppose your father would feel about that?"

Miya's eyes grew wide with horror at the thought of her father finding out that she had skipped school... again.

"Two months then?!" she cried out wrapping her arms around his waist and burying her head in his side. "Please don't tell papa, he'll be ssoooo mad!"

The Hokage slapped his hand over his face, and held it there. He desperately tried to regain his composer as his laughter threatened to escape. "She really knew how to work a grown-up," he thought.

When he pulled his hand away he was composed again. He took Miya and placed her on the ground before him.

"I will make you a deal, Miya-chan, " he said injecting a stern tone in his voice.

A deal meant evading trouble, so Miya shook her head in eager agreement.

"You can stay with me today and I won't tell on you, BUT, you have to promise to never skip school again, and train really hard with me today."

Miya's stomach flip-flopped. That was like the worst deal ever! However, she worshipped him, and he was going to let her stay; that had to count for something.

"Ok! Deal!" she finally agreed her smile lighting up her whole face.

"So... what was that technique you were doing, Uncle?"

Minato finally allowed himself to smile, "I call it the Rasengan."

my fav fanfic now XD

[darksyngr]

Never said she was 12. According to timeline Naruto is still learning Rasengen during the time skip (which this story taks place, and he is older than 12). Even though he learned it prior to Sasuke leaving he was still working on trying to do it without the clones, learning to increase its power, and so on. She is older than Naruto, but given she doesn't know Naruto's age she can only gauge that he is "around her age".

Hope that clarifies.

[Sasori]

u said miya is 12 but in the flashback she was 4 and she was talking to the 4rth but thats impossible because the 4rth died 12 years ago


im still a fan but whats with the messed up timeline XD
the time line is fine don't worry, she checks with me :laugh:
Never said she was 12. According to timeline Naruto is still learning Rasengen during the time skip (which this story taks place, and he is older than 12). Even though he learned it prior to Sasuke leaving he was still working on trying to do it without the clones, learning to increase its power, and so on. She is older than Naruto, but given she doesn't know Naruto's age she can only gauge that he is "around her age".

Hope that clarifies.
yeah xD

[Suicidal-kun]

Never said she was 12. According to timeline Naruto is still learning Rasengen during the time skip (which this story taks place, and he is older than 12). Even though he learned it prior to Sasuke leaving he was still working on trying to do it without the clones, learning to increase its power, and so on. She is older than Naruto, but given she doesn't know Naruto's age she can only gauge that he is "around her age".

Hope that clarifies.Ah, I see. With the way things were going, I assumed that it was during the arc where he and Jiraiya were in search of Tsunade. You make it seem like it is, anyways. Thanks for clearing that up. XD

[Miyah]

Did you have to make her name so close to mine? :O

Lolz, Raff Im still egging your FF. I don't have time for other stories.

[Suicidal-kun]

Did you have to make her name so close to mine? :O

Lolz, Raff Im still egging your FF. I don't have time for other stories.Oh right! I keep forgetting to read that, I'm still barely on chapter five.http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h97/Fair_One_Of_The_Last_Dusk/Miscellaneous/Cute%20Smilies/Kitsune%20Smilies/Fox48.gif

[darksyngr]

Did you have to make her name so close to mine? :O

Lolz, Raff Im still egging your FF. I don't have time for other stories.

It wasn't intentional, and already posted the fic when I realized what I had done. Sowry. :oops:


Anyway, suffering major writers block, so thinking of skipping to another character. Anyone think it is a good idea, or have ideas where I should go from here? I could def use the help.

[Suicidal-kun]

Anyway, suffering major writers block, so thinking of skipping to another character. Anyone think it is a good idea, or have ideas where I should go from here? I could def use the help.Well if you ever want any assistance, I can try mah best on MSN to help you out. Raff seems to enjoy using me to help her get her ideas straight and bounce ideas off of, so maybe you might, too?http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h97/Fair_One_Of_The_Last_Dusk/Miscellaneous/Cute%20Smilies/Kitsune%20Smilies/Fox48.gif

[darksyngr]

Well if you ever want any assistance, I can try mah best on MSN to help you out. Raff seems to enjoy using me to help her get her ideas straight and bounce ideas off of, so maybe you might, too?http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h97/Fair_One_Of_The_Last_Dusk/Miscellaneous/Cute%20Smilies/Kitsune%20Smilies/Fox48.gif

tomorrow I shall. I have a short day so will have plenty of time to veg out and write. I shouln't even be up right now but something got stuck in my head and wouldn't let me sleep till I gave up and got online, lol

Off to bed again!!
:ahhh:

[Suicidal-kun]

tomorrow I shall. I have a short day so will have plenty of time to veg out and write. I shouln't even be up right now but something got stuck in my head and wouldn't let me sleep till I gave up and got online, lol

Off to bed again!!
:ahhh:Well good luck trying to fall asleep and writing your chaps tomorrow. Be sure to write the one for Forgotten Realms: An Elf's Tale first! That one is so amazing!!! XD

[narutofandude]

Never said she was 12. According to timeline Naruto is still learning Rasengen during the time skip (which this story taks place, and he is older than 12). Even though he learned it prior to Sasuke leaving he was still working on trying to do it without the clones, learning to increase its power, and so on. She is older than Naruto, but given she doesn't know Naruto's age she can only gauge that he is "around her age".

Hope that clarifies.

damn then whos 12? because i remember that from somewhere XD

[Fayna]

I loves it! Doing a great job Mika. :D Also, they changed my schedule next week.... I'm off monday and working 9-4 on tuesday at the old store ftl. :( I'll hopefully see you at work some time or other. XD

Peace Home Key :P

[ProvidenceX]

excellent :D

[Macabre]

Nice fanfiction. Your style is fuuking shizzy. Wish I could say more but not a narugeek to know whats going on.

[Macabre]

However I can post over and over in here till I get back to 25 for yours truly.

[narutofandude]

im still waiting for the next chapter:nod:

[darksyngr]

bumped for poll

[IronTurkey]

Mika,

A mi me gusta. Please continue.

IT

[darksyngr]

OK Kiddies, I am planning to add some more chapters finally. I was at a loss what to do with new characters and their details. Reading all the fanfics surrounding SI members I found my inspiration. I was going to use you SI to create the supporting cast. Now I don't exactly want to make this an SI fanfic since I already have the manga going and there are plenty others, but the characters will be all of you as I interpret you in the ninja world. I'll change the names to suit me as well. Thus, we all are going to forced to figure out who is who.

Tomorrow I will post a new chapter.

[Mr.]

OK Kiddies, I am planning to add some more chapters finally. I was at a loss what to do with new characters and their details. Reading all the fanfics surrounding SI members I found my inspiration. I was going to use you SI to create the supporting cast. Now I don't exactly want to make this an SI fanfic since I already have the manga going and there are plenty others, but the characters will be all of you as I interpret you in the ninja world. I'll change the names to suit me as well. Thus, we all are going to forced to figure out who is who.

Tomorrow I will post a new chapter.

Writers actually do that quite often, they use personalities of those they know of as examples in their literature.

[Suicidal-kun]

OK Kiddies, I am planning to add some more chapters finally. I was at a loss what to do with new characters and their details. Reading all the fanfics surrounding SI members I found my inspiration. I was going to use you SI to create the supporting cast. Now I don't exactly want to make this an SI fanfic since I already have the manga going and there are plenty others, but the characters will be all of you as I interpret you in the ninja world. I'll change the names to suit me as well. Thus, we all are going to forced to figure out who is who.

Tomorrow I will post a new chapter.Even though I knew this, I'm still quite excited to see the new chapters!:D

I can't wait to see what the character inspired by me does. lol

[Ray]

Very cool not yet caught up and I am kind of burned out (long story) sounds interesting I will read more later. Thanks for more wonderful writing ma'am. :p

EDIT: After reading like 4 chapters. Is this in third person omniscient?

[darksyngr]

CHAPTER 6
Miya slowly opened her eyes trying to ignore the throbbing pain on the back of her skull where she had been hit. As the world came into focus Miya was greeted by a most disturbing sight. She found herself staring up into the eyes of the perverted, white-haired, old man. He had a wide grin plastered across his face that Miya couldn't help but compare to a grinning fox in a chicken coup. Miya screamed as her fist instinctively planted itself dead center of the man's face.
“PERVERT!" she shrieked as the man stumbled back holding his face while blood poured from his broken nose. Miya leapt from the bed ready to do battle in defense of her honor, and stumbled over the sheets pooled at her feet. Miya gritted her teeth against her obvious clumsiness and promised herself she could be properly humiliated later. First, she had to find her way out of a situation gone horribly wrong. For a split second she wondered if she was happy Masa wasn't around to see this, or unhappy that her friends weren't there to help her out of this mess.
Wildly Miya scanned the room assessing her possible escape routes when she spotted the yellow haired boy nearby with his arms crossed over his chest glowering at her.
“You... you!" she stuttered at a loss for words. What was going on? Why was she in this room? If they had wanted to kill her they would have done so in the forest, right? So, why bring her here? Unless... Miya's thoughts ran down a dark path that left her cold.
“Eeekkk!!!" You were planning to have your way with my lovely young body, weren't you?!" Miya turned to Naruto, “and you're his student! What kind of sick shit were you planning to do to me while I was unconscious?! And what kind of sensei are you!?" She screamed at Jiraiya.
“Never mind I don't want to know!" Miya covered her ears as if expecting some lurid answer from either of her captors. During the course of Miya's tirade Naruto's and Jiraiya's face had turned to shock then to horror.
“No, no, no... you misunderstand, little Miya," Jiraiya tried to explain waving his hands in front of himself trying to ward off her crazy accusations.
Miya stopped dead. A slow fearful rage crept along her spine as she processed his words.
“Miya?" she hissed, eyes narrowing to tiny glowing green slits,
“How the hell do you know my name?"
Jiraiya paused, realizing his error, and uttered a single, "Utoh".



Hisoka and Rie stood before their masked leader awaiting instructions. It had been three months since they had lost their comrade in a battle with the fatal Akatsuki, and neither was happy about standing before their leader, especially one member less than before.
Katsutoshi glared at the two young shinobi through the narrow slits of his mask willing his eyes to burn holes through them. He was livid. Katsutoshi had lost an exceptional operative to those robed freaks, and rather than admit any failure on his own part Katsutoshi preferred to lay the blame on these two. Katsutoshi was a man who prided himself on his intellect and strategic abilities; and to be bested so easily, after so much careful planning, especially by some rogue group of criminals... well, it wasn't something he could accept. It was a definitive slap to his ego. Therefore, the only possible explanation was that the fault must lie in the failure of these two.
“Even though I find your failure at your last mission as a reflection to your failure as shinobi, Nozomu-san has convinced me to allow you the chance to redeem yourselves." Katsutoshi's eyes passed over both shinobi looking for signs of shame or discomfort. Seeing neither of these in the shinobi, Katsutoshi's irritation grew.
Hisoka was standing a bit too relaxed as he picked at a nail with a bored look on his face. Rie on the other hand had a disdainful look on her face, and looked more as if she were trying to keep her temper in check. Truth be told, it was all Rie could do to keep herself from flipping off the general and storming out of the room.
Katsutoshi gripped the arms of his chair turning his knuckles white as he continued to speak to the disrespectful pair.
“Our numbers are few. We are in foreign lands, and far from home. Iseki Hanto's Kage will not risk any more shinobi for this mission. However, there are shinobi in these lands without a country, and without a home, who may be willing to convert to our cause. Your mission is to find such a shinobi to replace the member you lost."
Under his mask Katsutoshi smirked fully expecting an outburst to follow. Hisoka merely raised his eyebrow then offered a nonchalant shrug, “Eh, sure... why not," he muttered with a sarcastic edge, before going back to picking his nails. Rie did not disappoint.
“What the hell do you mean find a new member? Do you know how long it'll take to achieve the coordination necessary to be a bloody effective team?! And, among these poor excuses of shinobi? You've got to be f**king kidding me!"
Katsutoshi slammed his fist into the desk reducing it to splinters.
“DO NOT DISRESPECT ME!" he bellowed.
Rie stood her ground without flinching, but refrained from retorting back. She was certain one day she was going to kill the bastard by slow and horrible means. All she needed was a little patience.
"It was your incompetence that got you in this mess. Now you are going to correct it, or die trying," Katsutoshi snarled.
There was a long uncomfortable silence as Rie stared down the general, seriously weighing her chances of actually taking this bastard's head off right now.
“Fine. Lets go, Rie." Hisoka spoke up, touching her arm. He was already tired with the whole business. As far as he was concerned the sooner they found their new member the sooner they could go on with their lives. Besides, he was eager to leave Katsutoshi to his sulking. Hisoka found it too pitiful to bear witness to.

The two shinobi exited the small room wasting little time in beginning their mission. Neither noticed the shinobi cloaked in shadows nearby, watching their departure. Nozomu smirked. Things were going as he planned. Now all he had to do was lead these two to the right shinobi. Running several scenarios through his head Nozomu slunk off whistling a happy tune.



Miya strode out of the remains of the inn whose framework had been reduced to little more than nothing. As she stomped over shards of glass and broken timber Miya ignored the frightened onlookers as she plucked the splinters from her clothes. No one bothered to stop her as she made her way towards the edge of town. Miya silently berated herself for her temper. Now not only was she out of a much needed job, but after the unfortunate destruction of one of the town's most famed inns, she was going to have to relocate. How inconvenient. Ah well, she shrugged with a happy thought on her mind. There was always Konohagakure.

[Suicidal-kun]

UPDATE!!!:nuts::nuts::nuts:

Sui is happeh!!!:D:D:D

Awesome chapter Mika, I freaking love it. You're just too amazing Mika! I'll be eagerly waiting for the next one! =DDD

[IronTurkey]

Madame Mika,

Keep it coming. Don't stop. Etc. Etc. Etc.

IT

[darksyngr]

How does a ninja hide in plain sight? Through deception and misdirection. Knowledge is power, the less knowledge your enemy has of your skill the more he will underestimate. The ignorance of your enemies are your shadows.

You quoted my sig... -.-

[darksyngr]

Ah, and Sui/TL I edited quite a bit to the last chapter. You may want to re-read.

[darksyngr]

Very cool not yet caught up and I am kind of burned out (long story) sounds interesting I will read more later. Thanks for more wonderful writing ma'am. :p

EDIT: After reading like 4 chapters. Is this in third person omniscient?

Sorry, it took so long to reply. I'm bad about looking over stuff meaning to go back then forgetting. So in answer: Yes, it will be.

[ProvidenceX]

ah you finally posted more

[darksyngr]

May not post anymore, not worth all this time and effort four just 4 readers

[Mr. Drew]

I'm so glad you put links to the chapters =)
I've only read the first chapter cause at the moment that's all the time I have. I can finish the rest later on tonight. Anyway, I love your writing! Very descriptive and I could actually picture in my mind the whole chapter, no choppy images but fluent and smooth. Their personalities were written flawlessly! Just from the first chapter I can recognize how the characters will act from here on out.
Miya: Some what selfish, caring but dosen't like to admit it, some what of a joker.
Masa: greatful, somewhat of a joker.
Yota: The man that would be put in charge, serious, witty, agile.

I'm excited to keep reading and I'll have all chapters read by later tonight. You got me hooked, so I'll rate this 5 :)

[Philosoraptor]

Same as Near, I have to finish the rest of it still but I love what I already read. As soon as I have a moment to breathe from schoolwork I will do it. Please don't stop this yet!

[darksyngr]

ah you finally posted more
and....?

I'm so glad you put links to the chapters =)
I've only read the first chapter cause at the moment that's all the time I have. I can finish the rest later on tonight. Anyway, I love your writing! Very descriptive and I could actually picture in my mind the whole chapter, no choppy images but fluent and smooth. Their personalities were written flawlessly! Just from the first chapter I can recognize how the characters will act from here on out.
Miya: Some what selfish, caring but dosen't like to admit it, some what of a joker.
Masa: greatful, somewhat of a joker.
Yota: The man that would be put in charge, serious, witty, agile.

I'm excited to keep reading and I'll have all chapters read by later tonight. You got me hooked, so I'll rate this 5 :)

Something like that, lol. Thank you for finally reading.

Same as Near, I have to finish the rest of it still but I love what I already read. As soon as I have a moment to breathe from schoolwork I will do it. Please don't stop this yet!

Sorry, bout that I'm not in the best of moods to begin with and I was feeling slighted that so few responded to my fic. I actually threatened to kill Sui. :yell:

Anyway, chapter 6 is the chapter I introduced 4 SI members. Still plotting out Ch. 7, and pretty much up to the comments I get if I keep on going from there.

[Philosoraptor]

I'm going to wait for the next chapter to comment further, but bravo Miya. This is pretty solid stuff you've got :D.

[darksyngr]

CHAPTER 7

Shigemi was sitting on a fallen log twisting small razor-sharp blades into his freshly washed hair. He had always found it tedious having to remove the blades and reweave them back in, but the thought of blood in his magnificent hair bothered Shigemi far more than the time and concentration it took to style it. Normally, when he killed, Shigemi was far more careful, but this last mission simply couldn’t be helped. The bastard was tough and Nozomu wasn't around to help. Thus, presently he was focused intently on his task trying to carefully place the blades in strategic points along the locks of his sun-kissed auburn hair without slicing his fingers, or more importantly, without cutting his precious hair. His fingers slid through each long lock as he mentally measured down the length till he reached the point he wanted the blade. Shigemi had been weaving the small blades in his hair for so long that he had it down to a science, that to many, seemed to defy all logic. It was his favored weapon, and much to his amusement often caught his enemies off guard. Not only was his hair a glorious mane of golden perfection… it was deadly.

His companion sat lounging up in the branches of one of the many oaks, one legging dangling with the other bent propping up the small book he was reading. To the untrained eye he appeared fully absorbed in the words of the small book. Truth was, he was fully enraptured. The book was about a band of pirate kings on a quest to find the Fountain of Youth. He had to admit despite the simplistic writing style of the author the story was quite addicting. Izo was so engrossed he barely noticed the shadow moving stealthily toward Shigemi, but he did notice unlike his preening friend. Izo waited not feeling inclined to warn the ninja too busy playing with his hair.
“Let him learn a lesson,” Izo thought, pretending to read, as he watched events play out through the corner of his eye.

Nozomu moved toward the clearing where the two shinobi were camped. He took note of the ninja hidden in the trees, and then the one closer that appeared to be primping himself. Nozomu could not resist the temptation. Quietly, like a leaf in the wind, he moved in for the kill, and when he felt he was close enough to achieve his purpose yet far enough away that should he need to avoid a counterattack Nozomu spoke.
“It is done!” he called out to Izo making Shigemi jump, and in the process slice through several of his fingers. Shigemi let out a litany of curses as he leapt up to keep his blood from getting on his clothes. Shigemi glared at Nozomu wanting to tear into him, but wasn’t keen on having to take another bath so soon.
Izo nearly laughed out loud at the exchange. The two shinobi were constantly at odds, and Izo wondered how the two have yet to kill each other. Izo could bet as he watched the play of emotions across Shigemi’s face then smooth out into a serene expression, Shigemi’s anger did not stem from the pain of the injury, but the temporary disfiguration of his hand. Without fail, Shigemi spoke Izo’s speculations.
“You will pay for this, Nozomu.” Shigemi promised in a low voice.
“You have marred my beautiful perfection, and that is unforgivable.”
If Nozomu was in any way worried he did not show it in the roll of his eyes, or when he turned his back on Shigemi to face Izo.
“The outsiders have taken the bait; they have sent two of their operatives deeper into the Fire Country to find themselves a new member for their mission.”
Izo smiled, pleased with Nozomu’s success. The man could sell glasses to a blind man, Izo marveled.
“Good, this means our next step is to lead them to the shinobi of our choosing,” Izo commented already forming the next phase of his plan in his head.
“Shigemi, Nozomu… our next stop is Otafuku Gai.”
Nozomu and Shigemi looked at each other and grinned. The mission was already getting better.

[IronTurkey]

Madame Mika,

****ing awesome. Prov is excellently done.

Can't Wait For The Action,
IT

[Suicidal-kun]

Nice chapter Mika, loved it. I be so glad that you are in fact continuing this!:D:D:D

Things are getting quite interesting, I cannot wait for the next one. Loved the little homage to Drew, how about making a comment about my new fic sometime, huh?:p

Well I know whose who, already, not sure if I wanna ruin it for all your other...more slow minded readers. XP

[Mr. Drew]

Caught up.
Lol, yes I do have a simplistic writing style. I like how you tied a fic into a fic! Keep updating! I'm addicted to your writing.

+rep
Once I spread some...

[ProvidenceX]

and....?

you already know my thoughts on this fic very well, or you should at this point seeing how long i spent talking to you about it on msn
must my praise always be public?
come on you know I'd read your fics for your writting stlye alone, reguardless of the story or characters :laugh:
either way the last to chapters were both lovley i can only respond with and awed "wow" to the most recent one (or more like i'm just saying that because i'm to lazy to write an essay praiseing you :p)

[darksyngr]

I wanted you to tell me how happy you are with my version of you :D I was sad you weren't online. I need your help for Provilicous quotes and insults but you weren't around.

[ProvidenceX]

I wanted you to tell me how happy you are with my version of you :D I was sad you weren't online. I need your help for Provilicous quotes and insults but you weren't around.

lol sorry about that............. i'll help next time promise :):D:nod:
XD @ "Provilicous" :laugh:
also it's sweeet that you missed me an all but perhaps now you get and inkling of how i feel when you disapear for weeks at a time!!!!!!!!!!!
and as for your portrayal of me, i'm very please and i'll be sure to take the time to discuss it with you ^_*
oh an btw i'm saving my 2,000th post for this thread under the condition i remember, meaning it is your job to remind me =P

[Sasori]

Well shit I guessed all but one on first guess xD
And I can't belive it was the hottest one I didn't get :p

Anywayz I love the story, and I will be harassing you to write more.

[ProvidenceX]

Well shit I guessed all but one on first guess xD
And I can't belive it was the hottest one I didn't get :p

Anywayz I love the story, and I will be harassing you to write more.

hey you got me, on the first guess, i am the hottest one!!
also you did get the person you were reffering to on the first guess..... i just gave you a few hints :laugh:

[Mr. Drew]

New chapta soon?

[darksyngr]

Chapter 8

It was a clear midsummer afternoon and just a mile outside of Otafuku Gai the local hotsprings was filled with the energy and playfulness that every man fantasized about but few were ever so fortunate to see. Today was the young girl’s turn to have the springs to use for relaxing and bathing. They were all out making full use of the perfect weather, and the relaxing steaming water. Delightfully naked bodies were everywhere. Some were laying by the waters edge their bodies glistening as they basked under the warm sun, while others were splashing and playing in the water. Unbeknownst to them, they were not the only ones making the best of it.
Two young shinobi were hiding in the bushes watching, eyes glazed and mouths agape.
Both wore heavy camouflage and had attached branches of the nearby foliage to their head protectors and clothes. Even though both shinobi had finally mastered the Henge no Jutsu neither wanted to attempt to use it again during their super top secret intel mission. Their last attempt had gone horribly wrong. The sight of naked girls had caused them to lose the concentration necessary for the technique, and the found themselves in a highly hostile situation that had resulted in hospitalization. Learning from their mistakes the two young shinobi opted for less chakra intense disguises.

While they laid low in the bushes, pressing their bodies to the ground trying to hide the evidence of their lack of control, the girl they wanted to see most entered the clearing wearing no more than a small white towel that barely covered her torso. Her long glossy black hair fell down like waves across her slender shoulders. It bounced and waved as she nearly skipped her way to the edge of the water.
“Atsuo, there!” Toru whispered with excitement as he grabbed his friend’s arm. Toru pointed in the direction of the girl as if Atsuo somehow missed her arrival. He had not missed her by any means, and if anything he had spotted her long before Toru had. Atsuo remained silent his eyes glued to the form of his more feminine and beautiful teammate. Masumi was the center of Atsuo’s world. Not that he would ever try to explain that to Toru. Toru, at times, was a bit too simple minded for Atsuo to explain matters of the heart to. He knew Toru would most likely razz him endlessly, or try to embarrass him in front of Masumi. Instead, Atsuo remained silent as he gazed upon his hearts desire. His mind wandered into a realm of fantasy as Masumi chattered with one of the local girls. Words formed in his head that he tried to net together into something intriguing and encapsulating for the next chapter in his series. Masumi was his muse.

Finally the moment both boys were waiting for arrived. Masumi reached up to undo the knot in her towel. Time seemed to slow down to a crawl as each movement of Masumi’s hands undid the knot. So engrossed in watching they did not notice the menacing shadow loom over them.

“What the hell do you two think you are doing?” asked a soft low voice from behind. His voice was smooth but had a deadly edge to it that had the boys’ blood run cold.

Toru and Atsuo gulped in unison and slowly backed out of the bushes to turn around and face their sensei, all the while avoiding eye contact.

“We are here on an important mission, and the only thing you can think of doing is peeping in on the girls?”

Shivering Atsuo spoke their defense while still staring at his feet, “W…w…we were trying to gather data for the mission. You said Miya was a young girl and probably in this area. It would make sense she was at the hotsprings.”

Neither seeing the darkening look on their sensei’s face Toru also interjected another excuse, “…and you know how Atsuo is always writing. We were also trying to gather important data for his next chapter!”

Yota’s hands twitched as he struggled with himself not to throttle the two boys. Normally he was an even tempered man, but since the time these two were placed under his care they had been driving him crazy with their mischief. Despite Masa’s and Miya’s fighting and bickering, Yota came to understand he had been spoiled in comparison to the two that now stood before him. After a moment Yota simply sighed and turned away from the boys.

“Clean up and get to the village,” he said with a wave of his hand. “Also, make sure not to attract attention to yourself. We are in enemy territory, and we cannot afford to make the slightest mistake.”

Both boys nodded with relief that they had somehow managed to escape the worst.

[IronTurkey]

Madam Mika,

Epic. I like the boys' excuses for being peeping-toms. I also loved the way you presented the two boys (and their reason for not using the Henge no Jutsu XD).

Voracious,
IT

[ProvidenceX]

hey what do you know I guess the characters right ^_^
anyway this chapter is great cuz it made me -> XD rofl
also it gives me an excuse to imagine Masumi (actual name of girl character is baesd on ommited) naked
it's the kind of thing that "they" would do if they had ninja powers and it's the kind of thing that happens in naruto
it's very naruto esquie (sp?) humor
though it's missing a certain dumbass exagerating and going crazy :laugh:

[Mr. Drew]

Great chapter! I like the peeping details...sexy. Even though I would never do it irl.................;) :p

Haha Atsou is me correct?

[ProvidenceX]

Great chapter! I like the peeping details...sexy. Even though I would never do it irl.................;) :p

Haha Atsou is me correct?

you sir are correct :D

[Mr. Drew]

Yayyyzzz.
So the best finally shows himself.
:p

[darksyngr]

Great chapter! I like the peeping details...sexy. Even though I would never do it irl.................;) :p

Haha Atsou is me correct?


Hmm, somehow I find that hard to believe. You a teenage boy with ninja skills and the influence of "Toru" would never peep? Either, my young friend, you are gay or lying. :p

[Mr. Drew]

Hmm, somehow I find that hard to believe. You a teenage boy with ninja skills and the influence of "Toru" would never peep? Either, my young friend, you are gay or lying. :p

Lying.
Hah :laugh:
Only gay for Blake...yes deffinetly Blake

[ProvidenceX]

~BUMP~
WOOT POST 2,000!!!
i bless this thread with my awesomeness (not that it really needs it)
get writting again =P
and i saved my 2,000th post for this thread so be greatful!

[Suicidal-kun]

Oh shiet, I never left a review. XD

Chapter 8 was awesome, Mika, I freaking loved it. It was surprising to see a peeping scene with the character based on me nowhere to be seen, though.http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h97/Fair_One_Of_The_Last_Dusk/Miscellaneous/Cute%20Smilies/Kitsune%20Smilies/Fox48.gif

You actually made a fic with a character based on me that wasn't a complete perv, congratz.:D

I think I only missed 1? Oh well, I wasn't really paying much attention to who was who when reading, just wiping the drool off my keyboard after reading that great scene. XDDD

[Sasori]

Epic chapter as usual xD
I lol'd at the lying down so that their "lack of control" wouldn't be seen. xD

~BUMP~
WOOT POST 2,000!!!
i bless this thread with my awesomeness (not that it really needs it)
get writting again =P
and i saved my 2,000th post for this thread so be greatful!

How the **** did you beat me to 2 000? That's unfair xD

[ProvidenceX]

Epic chapter as usual xD
I lol'd at the lying down so that their "lack of control" wouldn't be seen. xD



How the **** did you beat me to 2 000? That's unfair xD

maybe it has something to do with you not posting for a long time.....:laugh:

[Mr. Drew]

New chap soon? xD

[darksyngr]

bumping so I can find it easy when I add more.