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Sheriff
10-04-2008, 10:09 AM
An action/adventure/supernatural story for action fans like me. Contains detailed action and magic all induced into an awesome plot that will blow your mind.

Image Awaiting is about a boy and his deep connection with a alternate world called Image.

It revolves around the hidden events that happened in Image sixteen years ago and the unimagineable consequences they have on the present day.



IMAGE AWAITING


PROLOGUE
DONG! DONG! DONG!
The loud clanking of a large bell broke through the cool air of the dark night, carrying its sound wide across the rocky hilly terrain beneath it. There was an electrified tension in the air, despite the night being so cold.

It might have been the hundred of feet and hooves that thundered loudly all over the ground. It might have been the voices shouting orders over the entire din.

It might have been the cloaked figure that huddled beneath some boulders that had caved uncomfortably over him.


“Soldier! What’s your report?”

“The intruder is still around here, sir. Some of our wounded soldiers say he is a 6th year”.

“6th year fighter?! Crap! This isn’t some training routine! We lieutenants are 4th years; the higher ups should know we are precisely inadequate for this mission! Where are they anyway?”

“They are having an emergency meeting at this very moment, sir”.

“M-Meeting?! By thunder! King Bandor’s son has been abducted and they have the time for meetings?! What’s really going on here?”

“Sir…, I hear King Bandor is dead…”

The cloaked figure shifted slightly in his hiding place close by, it wasn’t from his awkward position between the rocks.

“Watch your mouth, soldier!”

“Sorry sir…, it’s just…I passed by the meeting room on my way here. I wouldn’t joke with something this serious”.

“Dead…, I hope dearly that you are completely wrong… Though it’s no reason for us to lose focus. We must find the intruder and retrieve the king’s son, a lot depends on it! Relay the info on the intruder to all the soldiers”.

“Yes sir!”

The sound of hooves galloping on the rocky ground could be heard; it slowly faded into the clamor of the night.
The cloaked figure shifted again as he heard the sound of running feet approaching.

“What is it this time?”

“Captain Molder is on his way here to help with the mission, sir”.

“Finally, some sensible thinking from above…”

The cloaked figure shifted once again, Molder…? Got to move.
At that moment a man jumped directly into his sight and looked him straight in the eyes.

“I’ve found him! I’ve found the intrud”-

In that split second the cloaked figure was directly in front the soldier, his raised leg driving straight into the soldier’s belly.

The soldier coughed as he fell to the ground, “…fast”.

The cloaked figure spun round to face the two soldiers that had just been talking.
One soldier jumped into the air towards the cloaked figure, bringing his sword down as he descended on his target.

The cloaked figure’s leg found him in midair, ramming him squarely in the ribs and sending him to the ground.

The cloaked figure ducked and spun around just before a sword shot past his cheek and cleft his hood off his head. In the light of the moon, the lieutenant found himself staring into the face of a man. Then they locked eyes.

“Y-Your eyes…!” the lieutenant stuttered, losing his composure in overwhelming shock.

The cloaked man looked away even as he delivered two solid punches to the lieutenant’s chest. The soldier slumped to the ground.

The cloaked man stumbled back with his eyes tightly shut as if to keep something in. No,please not now…
*
The storm raged with unmistakable anger as lightning flashed across the dark sky with a blinding glare. Thunder echoed across the sky and to the earth below.

But what stood at the edge of the woods across the street was of a different picture, the cloaked young man huddled a baby close wanting to make sure that the pouring rain had no contact with the child.

He had a hood completely covering his head, save for the few strands of brown hair that hung beyond the rim of his hood. He looked down at the baby sleeping in his arms and felt a mix of emotion stir through him, fear was one of them.

Within a few hours he had changed the life and destiny of the child, not to mention his own. He looked up across the street towards the houses in front of him; their lights illuminating their backyards. His concealed eyes focused on one directly in front of him and he nodded slightly to himself. The lights within the house were off, indicating that its occupants were asleep.

The young man took a step out of the shadows that the trees had cast, glancing along the road as he did. There was no one in sight on the light flooded street. He quickened his steps as he moved directly into the light cast by the street lamps, his eyes darting wildly in all directions.

In a few seconds he was across the street, making sure the baby was alright.
Then for a moment he froze and instantly swung his head towards the woods behind him. In the light of the street lamp, his now visible brown eyes stared steadily at the unmoving trees. The young man sighed and turned back to the house before him.

He took a deep breath and stepped onto the doorway, fear washed over him without warning. His hand reached for the doorbell reluctantly, a few inches away it pulled back. He felt his knees buckle violently and his breath shallow, within himself he felt his heart as if it were been torn in two.

The man looked down at the child in his arms with tears welling immensely in his eyes; guilt had filled him without measure. The tears could not be held for any longer, they trailed down his cheeks freely.

“I’m sorry, so sorry,” he sobbed uncontrollably. “Please forgive me,” he gasped, running his fingers lightly over the baby’s peaceful face. His shuddering continued for a while, showing his inability to calm the turmoil within him.

He suddenly stood straight and faced the door before him with a deep breath; he rang the doorbell twice and waited. It’s all going to end here, he thought.

Within himself he knew that was a lie, nothing would end here; in fact he knew this would only delay what was to come. The sound of footsteps got to his ears. There was now no going back.

CHAPTER ONE (THE FIELD TRIP)

The rain had left it’s presence behind that Monday morning, wetting the grass and leaving a distinctive cold blanket in the atmosphere.

It was one thing Mark Stedman really didn’t like when he stepped out of the house on his way to school; he was a boy with an average height, clear blue eyes and dark brown hair. He stopped in front of the porch stairs and looked around; the morning really looked wet before him.

“Take care, honey,” a female voice said from inside the house.

Mark sighed, “Mum, I’m sixteen,” he said as he went down the steps.

“That’s why you should take care,” Mrs. Kathy Stedman replied heartily from inside.
Mark crossed the lawn, wondering why adults acted the way they did. He gave up as he reached the low wooden gate of the fence around his house. He stepped unto the sidewalk and looked around, the bus hadn’t arrived yet.

Just then the unmistakable purr reached his ears; he turned to see the bus curve around the corner and towards him. It stopped in front of him and opened its door with a gentle hiss.

He was onboard the partially full bus in a few seconds trying to find a seat, he found one four rows away from the driver. He sat down with a sigh and wiped the dew off the window by him.

“Hi Mark,” a voice said. Mark turned to see Tom Harvey, his best friend, drop into the seat beside his.

“I didn’t see you on the bus,” Mark said in pure surprise.

“Well, I just saw you,” Tom replied with a smile.

Mark turned and looked outside the window, “I can’t believe today’s a Monday”.

“Have to agree with you there,” Tom said adjusting the bag on his lap, “Mondays aren’t supposed to be wet”.
A moment of silence passed between the two friends as the bus began moving again.

“Umm, Mark…,” Tom began with a hint of uncertainty.

“What is it?” Mark replied without turning from the window.

“Do you think she’ll… notice me today?” Tom asked with his voice very low.

“She?” Mark mumbled as he turned to face his friend, “Who’s ‘she’?”

“You know …..Annie,” Tom replied in a hurried tone.
Mark nodded slightly as he recalled the girl in their class called Annie. She was a girl with long braided black hair and clear blue eyes, small nose and unmistakable beautiful dimples when laughing.

Mark found himself laughing softly, “You still have a crush on her-,”

“Not so loud,” Tom hushed with a quick glance around. “So…, do you think she will?” Tom pried as he turned back to Mark.

The presence of laughter seeped away from Mark as he wondered on how to answer; in truth he didn’t have an answer.

“Why?” he finally asked, “Why are you so expectant for something that might never happen?”

“Well,” Tom began, his eyes lowering to his laps with a dreamy expression played on his face, “I guess it’s all I can do, hope and believe”.

Mark turned back to the window, “Sorry Tom, I honestly don’t know what to tell you,” he murmured.
Tom stared at his friend for a while and realized that Mark had never been the optimistic type. Never willing to look forward to something, to anticipate. In that was a person who didn’t want to get hurt and disappointed, to feel the burn of frustration and helplessness.

“Some day, I hope you will,” was Tom’s reply.

Just as Mark was about to turn from the window again, his eyes caught something at the edge of the woods, across the street from his house. It made him look back.

“Tom, take a look at this,” he said moving closer to the window to get a better view.
Beyond the first line of trees was an old man dressed in strange clothing, clothing that looked a century older than its occupant. His steps were weary and slow as if exhausted from a long trip; dragging squarely on the leaf covered ground beneath him. In his hand was a small tattered pouch.

Mark and Tom watched silently as the bus pulled away from the strange scene, the man was now a distant shadow in the trees.

“What was that?” Tom asked with a voice full of confusion.

“I have no idea,” Mark said. The very thought of it sent his hair standing on end. “And I don’t think I want to know,” he added after an afterthought.
He closed his eyes and lay against the seat trying to forget what he had just seen……and heard. It stayed with him all the way to the school.
The school bell rang noisely throughout the corridor as lessons began, students rushed into their seats as Mr. Walton entered the class. The science teacher looked around the class, totally ignoring the disturbance as students moved into their seats.

“How are my students this morning?” he asked with a wide smile.

“As dull as the morning”, a voice piped from behind.

“I can see that”, Mr. Walton murmured under his breath as he glanced at the dull faces that stared back at him. Strangely, a smile appeared on his face, “I’ve got an answer to that”, he said, moving towards the board.

An intense moment of silence was held as the teacher enjoyed the build up of anxiety in his students.

“Not another pop quiz,” someone muttered.

“I planned a little field trip to the woods. We’re going there to study the plants and animals native to these places”, he said, the smile on his face widening.

There was a sudden uproar of joy as students leapt off their chairs in joy, balled sheets of paper zooming in every direction.

“Quiet!” Mr. Walton hissed in a pleading tone, raising his hands up for silence, “There’s a bus waiting outside on the courtyard. I want you all to silently get into the bus and wait for me, silently,” he continued.
The students filed out of the classroom and through the long corridor that led to the courtyard outside. They rushed into the bus as if it was all they could do to live, the noise produced was inevitable.

Mark and Tom took seats at the very end of the bus, unconsciously trying to avoid the noisemaking.

“Look who’s in,” Tom said, staring at the doorway of the bus. Mark looked up and regretted ever doing so, the very confident figure standing in the doorway of the bus turned out to be no other than his worst enemy; Slick Evers.

As strange as it felt, Mark never understood why he hadn’t been able to get along with Slick. At least he had never tried to spoil things between them, it just happened... casually. From the very first day they met.

Slick dropped into a seat two rows away from Mark and Tom.
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Honestly I was thinking he would miss school today,” Mark murmured just loud enough for Tom to hear.

His friend grinned, “Well, that makes two of us”.

“Is that how students define the word ‘silently’,” Mr. Walton said as he climbed into the bus. There was a sudden hush that swept through the entire bus as the teacher took his place beside the driver’s seat.

Seconds later the middle aged driver climbed into his seat and started the engine. “Are we ready to go?” Mr. Walton asked, the chorus of ‘yes’ from the students was as loud as the engine of the bus as it revved to life.

They pulled slowly onto the road and headed for the woods ahead. It was the only place actually inhabited by plants and trees for kilometers in this large estate of buildings.

There had being the reports of the sighting of wild animals within. Mrs. Greta; an old lady staying a couple of houses away from Mark’s place claimed she had seen a wolf one morning.

Mark didn’t believe her just like many other people, but the thought of such a claim being true made Mark feel cold, even colder now that he was about to enter the woods.

xEternalMelody
10-04-2008, 10:16 AM
WOW.Very nice.Very detailed,I give it a 10/10.=D

Is this the first fanfic you have written?

Please continue updating.=D

Mind if I change the title to just "TBO-IMAGE WAITING"?:)

Sheriff
10-04-2008, 10:20 AM
Sure:)

xEternalMelody
10-04-2008, 10:22 AM
Sure:)

Thank you,it seems more grabbing.=D


Please update when you can!:)

Sheriff
10-04-2008, 01:32 PM
Hi guys, here's the continuation.Hope you like it.:D

“We’re here,” the teacher said opening the door seconds before the bus actually stopped.

Mark blinked. The ride had been too quick. He stared at the trees even as he made his way to the door; the trees seemed to stare back at him. He stepped out into mild sunshine with a crushing urge to stretch; Tom stepped out behind him and took a deep breath.

This was just another Monday of many countless others, a thought Mark received well into his mind. He was content with this and as a matter of fact content with anything else each day had to bring, as long as he didn’t have to expect anything, one could die just out of that.

But this Monday was different, its invincible hands stretched far back into the past to bring forth what had been waiting patiently for this day. It had been delayed years back. But then, what could a few souls do against destiny that was well defined beyond physical intervention, it would claim its right of power, irrespective of situation and event.

Mark would never have believed in such things or even pondered about them, but yet they remained true, as true as the strange creatures that watched Mark from the shadow of the woods, observing his every move and breathe.

These were creatures that were sent to do him as much harm as death itself.


Coming soon (Being edited in the meanwhile) : Chapter Two (SEEK AND DESTROY)
The deadly unknown past has caught up to Mark and is watching him - literally!!

Upcoming events:There’s nothing to worry about, he thought as he turned around. Mark looked at the trees ahead of him and confidently knew that was his way back. He took his first step and heard a sound he couldn’t quite make out.

He remembered Mrs. Greta’s claim of wolves in these woods and knew the sound he was hearing wasn’t from his mind.

The sound of hooves on the damp earth reverberated through his ears with enough clarity. Mark turned sharply to his right and saw a flash of a horse’s flank before it disappeared behind the trees.

He swallowed hard and felt his chest tightening with unknown fear, with what he had just seen, was there really a wolf in these woods?


Please comment and let me know your veiws and suggestions, they are appreciated.:D

Sheriff
10-04-2008, 03:04 PM
CHAPTER TWO (SEEK AND DESTROY)

“Calm down kids,” Mr. Walton said with raised hands, unfortunately it took more than that to silence them. “Quiet!” he roared and it silenced them.

“Everybody, face me,” he said taking a step back, “Do you remember the groups you formed last week? I want you to reform those groups”.

The students began shuffling themselves, forming six groups with five in each group. Mark stood with Tom by his side; they were joined by two girls and a boy.

“I have thirty sheets of paper here and I am going to hand one to each of you…” Mr. Walton began to hand them out, “…for you to note down what you see here. The group with the highest number of names of plants and animals is going to win my heart this morning”.

Mark pulled out his pen as he stared at the sheet in his hand, then at the greenery before him; strangely he missed his old biology teacher.

“What’s the matter, Mark?” Slick said aloud as he strode towards him, “Don’t tell me all you can see are dead leaves and twigs”.

The whole class with the exception of Mark and Tom burst into laughter; Mark could feel his face reddening.

“Well that’s because they were the first things I saw on your head this morning,” Mark shot back and the laughter was louder this time.

“Why don’t you show me,” Slick growled, stepping nearer.

“A little closer and I would help you pull them out,” Mark hissed.

“Time out,” the teacher said stepping in between them, “you’ll have to do this another time”.

Slick stepped back, sneering.

“Nice one,” Tom whispered, patting Mark on the back.

“Well kids,” the teacher said with a clap of his hands, “let’s start, shall we”.

The class slowly approached the wall of trees before them, there was no doubt fear had them all, even Mark.

“One last thing,” Mr. Walton said as he slowly trailed behind them, “I know these woods aren’t very large, but that should not stop you from being careful. I really wouldn’t like to be responsible for someone’s disappearance”.

Mark moved towards the curved line of trees, the rest of the class on his left. The scene behind the trees was very different from the one before it; there was a dark blanket produced by the absence of sunlight which swept over the entire floor with the damp ground looking alive enough to swallow someone up.

Slowly the class filed into the trees as cautiously as they could be. Todd Summers, a boy with thick glasses, was the first to break the tension when he bent down to examine a certain flowered plant.

“Has this got a name at all?” he asked, looking up at the members of his group. The class suddenly swung back to life, eyes and hands moving in all directions.

At the base of a tree, Mark stopped and looked down. Its roots played up on the surface of the ground, making it impossible to tell which root ended where. He bent down to have a closer look, there were leaves anchored under the roots.

He pulled them out and found termites swarming out angrily; finally he would get something on his sheet. With that jotted down, he moved in a little deeper, his eyes playing crucially on the ground. He found a creeping plant and bent down to examine it.

Then he found himself thinking of Tom’s words. “I guess it’s all I can do, hope and believe”.

Those words strangely had a binding effect on him; it kept coming back every time he tried to push it away. Just like the depiction of the old man in the strange clothing. Mark shook the picture out of his head.

It was then that he realized that the mummer of the class was getting fainter. He got up with a pang of fear, he couldn’t hear them anymore.

“Calm down,” he said to himself with a deep breath, “don’t make a fool of yourself”.

“Tom?” . There was no reply.

There’s nothing to worry about, he thought as he turned around. Mark looked at the trees ahead of him and confidently knew that was his way back. He took his first step and heard a sound he couldn’t quite make out.

He remembered Mrs. Greta’s claim of wolves in these woods and knew the sound he was hearing wasn’t from his mind.

The sound of hooves on the damp earth reverberated through his ears with enough clarity. Mark turned sharply to his right and saw a flash of a horse’s flank before it disappeared behind the trees.

He swallowed hard and felt his chest tightening with unknown fear, with what he had just seen, was there really a wolf in these woods?

I’ve got to get out of here, Mark thought, taking another step forward.

He heard the sound of hooves again, felt it through the ground and knew there was nothing illusory about the maker of that sound. The sound came from behind, Mark turned and saw nothing, but yet knew there was more than that.

His knees buckled violently with intense fear, his heart thrashing to get out of his chest. Suddenly it was like the trees were slowly closing in on him.

He couldn’t take it anymore, Mark ran like he had never done before. He tripped over the root of a tree, caught himself and was running by that very second.

He didn’t care if the rest of the class laughed at him, the anxiety was suffocating.

“NO!” he screamed, as he reached the clearing. He watched in crushing despair as the school bus rode off, leaving behind a cloud of dust. He sank to his knees, shaking like a dried leaf in the wind, with the fear of the forest still gnawing at him.

Something wasn’t right, Mr. Walton hadn’t checked to see whether he was there, and neither had Tom. Something was very wrong...

Next: Part two of Chapter Two
The past has a voice and it's calling Mark to his death!
First actions scenes are just around the corner!

Next: “Who are you?” he suddenly blurted, the man in the shadows remained silent but merely tapped a leg idly.

Mark was about to take another step forward when a deep gut feeling told him this man wasn’t harmless, an icy feeling washed hard over him like a high sea wave on the shoreline.

He stumbled back and almost fell, his eyes fixated on the figure before him.

“Now minding our manners, are we?” the man said with a chuckle, “I was beginning to wonder when you would realize the nature of the situation you are in”.

Sheriff
10-05-2008, 11:39 AM
Mark slowly rose off his knees and looked at the dirt covered road that led out of the woods. Calm down, he thought helplessly to himself, you’re safe.

Somehow that felt like a lie, he turned to look back at the trees behind him, he was faintly sure no wild animal would break from the cover of the trees.

He turned back and began walking toward the road.

THWANG!

The arrow missed Mark’s foot by mere centimeters as it struck the ground beside him, his heart skipped a beat as he looked down at it, he knew it was real enough to hurt.

He heard the air sing again as two more flew over his head and struck the bare dusty ground to his left. He turned to face the silent trees and saw nothing but shadows playing deep into the forest, he glanced briefly at the arrows firmly in the ground beside him.

The arrows had missed me on purpose, he realized with growing dread, somewhere in the mist of those trees he knew he was been watched. Mark struggled to keep the little calm he had left, he had to think.

Deliberately he took a few steps towards the road, as expected he heard the air sing again and turned towards the sound immediately.

The arrow flew past his left shoulder perfectly close enough to touch; it had served its purpose. He now faced the trees that he was sure hid his assailants.
They were preventing him from leaving the woods.

He opened his mouth to speak and found out his voice had left with the bus, he felt paralyzed and helpless.

His head had begun to ache with millions of questions which demanded insane answers. For a tense minute he stared into those trees, willing himself to see what he possible couldn’t see.
His mind finally began settle and he begun to calmly diagnose his situation. He had a gut feeling there was a connection between the horses he had seen earlier and these arrows, but what stunned Mark the most was; why?

“Come here, boy,” the voice drifted out of the trees and directly into Mark’s ears, that commanding voice had a cold edge which made Mark shiver within.

The arrows stuck firmly in the ground told him he could only obey.
He began walking towards the trees feeling helpless and stupid beyond reason, he was willingly walking towards unknown doom.

Mark reached the edge of the trees and stopped, the cutting silence told him he had to continue.

He was soon under the shadow of the trees, straining to adjust his eyes to the dim light. He stumbled over the root of a tree and stopped moving, his eyes sweeping wildly across the greenery before him.

“Keep moving forward,” the voice ordered with dread calm.

Mark strained his eyes some more to see the source of the sound but saw nothing. He resumed his walk of madness; his heart had once again begun beating against his chest, a sound he was sure every inhabitant of the woods could hear.

As he moved deeper into the woods the trees begun to spread apart, with pockets of shrubs growing here and there. Sunrays filtered through the trees in little shafts, enlightening the ground a bit.

His mind was beginning to play impossible scenes about his future for him, and he found them all uncomforting.

A few more steps deeper into the woods, he saw something he would have never believed to be here. It was a clearing as large as the perimeter of his house, with lush green grass that looked like they had never been touched before.

The most surprising feature of the place was the way sunlight streamed over the place.

Mark stopped instinctively at the very edge of the clearing and looked around, past the grass on the other side of the clearing the trees took over the ground again, casting their blinding shadow over the muddy floor.

He suddenly realized standing with his back bluntly to the trees was very unnerving, he stepped into the sunlight and onto the grass.
He blinked, his eyes straining to adjust to the sudden presence of light.

Mark turned around to face where he had been standing a few seconds ago as he felt the presence of a being. He saw something, just behind the third line of trees.

Straining his eyes, he realized he was staring at a man, but a strange one for sure.

This man seemed exceptionally tall from the shadows and was actually bare-chested, strangely Mark felt he was encountering a wild creature.
Mark took a wary step forward in an attempt to see the man better; he was beginning to wonder if a prank was being pulled on him.

“Who are you?” he suddenly blurted, the man in the shadows remained silent but merely tapped a leg idly.

Mark was about to take another step forward when a deep gut feeling told him this man wasn’t harmless, an icy feeling washed hard over him like a high sea wave on the shoreline.

He stumbled back and almost fell, his eyes fixated on the figure before him.

“Now minding our manners, are we?” the man said with a chuckle, “I was beginning to wonder when you would realize the nature of the situation you are in”.
“Who are you?” Mark repeated, more weakly now, “What do you want?”

“Hey Frenze,” a new voice sounded to the man’s right, “Are you sure this is the one?”

Mark saw another similarly strange man, the one who had just spoke, step forward into view.

“This situation looks similar to the one we were briefed about, doesn’t it?” the first guy grumbled, folding his arms.

“I don’t know,” the second one said reluctantly, “besides, you know what happens if we mess up”.

The first one sighed silently, “The only thing that actually bothers me is that, this mission seems just too easy,” he said.

Mark could hear their perfect English and yet it felt like they were speaking Greek.

“What’s going on here and what are you talking about?” Mark demanded with withering courage. The two men fell silent and looked at him as if noticing him for the first time.

“Let’s get this over and done with,” the one called Frenze said.

Two more men appeared into view, Mark heard the rustling of leaves behind him and turned, four more strange men stood there, a little into the shadow.

“What do you want?” Mark whimpered, as sheer fear made him fall to his knees, “I haven’t done anything wrong”.

The eight men stepped into the bright sunlight and straightened up against the warm sun.

For a few seconds, Mark blinked stupidly at them; obviously to make sure what he was seeing was out of his head. The picture remained the same and in at that split second, Mark found himself screaming with all his might.

He screamed with all his strength and will, feeling his head expand as if to burst open. The eight beings around him were not men, not even close to humans.
Mark stared blankly at them, centaurs. Mark had seen them in movies, read about them in books and was sitting in their mist today.

Centaurs, with the torso of a man connected to the headless body of a horse, eight of them.

Slung across their shoulders were leather belts, which in turn held long swords across their backs.

Frenze stepped forward, his eyes playing slowly over a paralyzed Mark, “He has no idea what’s going on”.

The remaining centaurs burst into laughter at Frenze’s words.

“Which means,” Frenze continued, his hand moving slowly to his back, “that wizard hasn’t contacted him yet”.

Mark could hear the metallic hiss of Frenze’s sword as he pulled it from its scabbard at his back. The long straight edged sword glinted in the bright sunlight, as the centaur leveled it to his side.

“What are you going to do with that?” Mark asked, even though he knew the answer.
Frenze portrayed a smile which sent a chill into Mark’s skin, “It’s a pity to die and worse, not know why you die”.

The centaur raised the sword over Mark, its gleaming edge facing him directly.


Next: Part Three of Chapter Two.
A major character is about to make an appearance.
Fight scenes also coming up!

Upcoming events: There was a loud swooshing sound from the trees and all nine heads turned towards the sound.

With blinding speed two saplings came flying out of the darkness, roots first.

THUD! The two centaurs at Mark’s sides were forcefully pushed off their feet as the flying trees slammed straight into them. They crashed straight into the trees at the other side of the clearing, unconscious

Sheriff
10-10-2008, 01:32 PM
The long awaited action is here!:nuts:
If possible, please comment on the turn of events in the story.
Thank you.:D



But this Monday was different, its invincible hands stretched far back into the past to bring forth what had been waiting patiently for this day. It had been delayed years back. But then, what could a few souls do against destiny that was well defined beyond physical intervention, it would claim its right of power, irrespective of situation and event.

There was a loud swooshing sound from the trees and all nine heads turned towards the sound. With blinding speed two saplings came flying out of the darkness, roots first.

THUD! The two centaurs at Mark’s sides were forcefully pushed off their feet as the flying trees slammed straight into them. They crashed straight into the trees at the other side of the clearing, unconscious.

“An ambush!” Frenze shouted, stepping back. Two of the standing centaurs lunged straight towards the trees, whipping their swords out of their scabbards in the process.

As Mark watched, he noticed something strange about their movements. The speed at which the centaurs moved was unreal; they were so fast he could just barely see them.

Another swooshing sound brought Mark out of his trance; he looked to the trees just to see two more saplings shoot out of the shadow of the trees like bullets.

Mark heard a bone crunching sound as the two advancing centaurs were tossed back by the flying trees. He watched transfixed as their bodies flew past him and crashed to the ground at the other side of the clearing.

“Who’s there?!” Frenze roared at the trees which remained silent. The swooshing sounded again, nearer this time.

“Get ready!” Frenze said to the three remaining centaurs that suddenly dropped into a stance.

Two trees shot out again with the speed of the previous ones, two centaurs dodged them in time, one wasn’t fast enough as a tree hit him full in the chest and took him clearly off the ground.

Just as the centaur fell to the ground, a man suddenly lunged out of shadow of the trees and straight towards Mark, under his right arm was a sapling.

Mark felt like screaming again but his strength had been drained by fear and amazement. Yet again he just barely saw the man advancing with the same strange speed, possibly faster.

The man slid to a stop in front of Mark and swung the cow sized tree over Mark with ease. The three remaining centaurs moved back as the roots of the tree missed their faces by a hair’s breath.

Using the momentum he had just gathered with the swing, the man spun a perfect 360 and tossed the tree at the centaurs.

Frenze and one centaur dodged to their left using that unusual speed Mark still couldn’t comprehend; the other centaur took the impact squarely and was thrown to the ground beside his unconscious comrades.

The clearing fell into silence for about a minute as the four figures froze, observing each other. The man calmly straightened up and exhaled loudly, his eyes playing slowly over the two armed centaurs before him.

Mark looked up at the man who had just saved him from Frenze’s sword; he was surprisingly young, possibly in his twenties. His light brown hair was curly and short, framing his face to the top of his neck; he had brown eyes and thin eyebrows. He wore a green t-shirt and blue faded jeans, with dirted white sneakers.

The man looked like any ordinary man and yet, Mark had just seen him swing and throw trees as though they were pieces of sticks.
Mark noticed the man was grinning, he found it strange. In front of two towering armed centaurs, there was nothing to grin about.

“I never thought the king’s soldiers would ever stoop this low,” the man said in a clear voice “to turn their swords on a helpless unarmed kid”.

The two centaurs lowered their swords and seemed to relax a bit.

“I knew this mission seemed too easy,” Frenze said, grinning back at the man.

“I must say that I’m surprised,” the man continued, “they sent 3rd year soldiers to do the job. Isn’t your commander getting too relaxed?”
Frenze laughed out loud, obviously amused by the man’s words, “My, my, you must be very experienced to know my level of skill and power with just a glance,” the centaur said, amidst his laugh.

Mark felt like sinking into the ground at this moment without anybody noticing, the three figures before him looked very relaxed but he could tell a fight would break out any moment. It was an undeniable feeling in the air.

“Now, let me see if I can tell anything about you with a glance,” Frenze said, “from the way you just speedily took out six of my soldiers, you must be a 6th year fighter. Also with that show of tremendous power and superhuman strength of yours, you must be the famous Loren I’ve heard a lot about”.

The centaur beside Frenze stiffened at these words and Mark could distinctly tell fear had taken hold of him.

What insane strength! How can a human be this strong?…it’s impossible! The centaur thought and swallowed hard.

Frenze seemed to also notice and turned to his comrade, “There’s nothing to fear, Calix. He might outrank us in strength and skill but there’s two of us and one of him”.

“I don’t know, Frenze,” the centaur called Calix replied, still looking fearfully at the man, “the highest ranking I’ve ever fought was a 5th year whom I nearly lost my limbs to. To make it worse, we are going up against the Loren”.

Frenze snorted, turning to the man.
“That’s fine, Calix,” Frenze replied, “Take care of the boy and I’ll kill this man”.

The man grinned once more, “I guess it can’t be helped”.



Next: Chapter Three (Loren from the land of Image)
Things are finally heating up! 3rd year and 6th year? What do they mean?
An epic battle over the life of Mark begins!

Upcoming events:What happened in the next second, Mark never knew. He looked up just to see Frenze suddenly appear directly before him, sword coming down incredibly fast.

He heard the air whistle sharply just before Frenze’s sword stopped centimeters from his face; he looked up and saw the man holding the centaur’s arm calmly.

Frenze chuckled, “You were able to catch up to my speed, I’m impressed”.

“You must be quiet stupid if you meant that crawl of yours,” the man replied tartly.

“Then what about this?!” Frenze shouted. Mark blinked and saw the centaur’s hoof in front of his face, on top of it was the man’s foot.

Even though he hadn’t seen it, he knew what had just happened. Frenze had tried to kick him but was stopped by the man. All that, had happened in less than a second!

“Now Calix!” Frenze shouted.

The other centaur appeared behind the man, bringing his sword down on the man’s back.

There was a heavy sound as Calix slid forcefully back on his hooves, clutching at his chest. The man’s other leg was up; Mark stared in amazement with a gaping mouth.

The centaur had just being kicked and nobody had seen it.

Sheriff
01-14-2009, 04:04 AM
dude..., I must probably suck at this:cry:

Sheriff
10-24-2009, 03:57 PM
Hey guys, I realized my story wasn't really 'up-ing' so I took some time to plan into it and put more excitement into it.
I would lke to give you a preview into coming events of the story(in the spoiler). Lemme know if you like it and I'll continue:D
The wind rustled softly through the trees and in that instant Balker lunged forward, so fast Mark didn’t realize it for a second.
Balker feigned a charge at Han and instantaneously changed his target to the bandit with a down swung strike.
The bandit parried the attack to his side with a smirk, “Nice try, pal”.
He’s really a 5th year, Balker suddenly realized. He felt movement behind him.
Han dashed straight towards Balker’s back, his sword trailing rigidly beside him for an upwards slash.
“Too slow!” Balker shouted. His hind legs flashed up, hooves landing squarely against Han’s chest.
Han flew backwards faster than he had charged at Balker; he brutally grazed against a tree and hit the ground hard on his back, sending fragments of wood splinters flying into the air.
The bandit centaur swung his sword to his side simultaneously as he swung his fist at Balker’s face.
Balker’s head tilted to the side and he grunted from the blow just as the bandit swung his sword down on his opponent.
Balker parried the attack just in time from guided instinct and swung the bandit’s sword skillfully out of his way.
In an instant Balker was on his hind legs, his front legs kicked out fiercely at the bandit’s chest.
The bandit centaur cursed loudly as he raised his free arm into the path of his opponent’s hooves, a soft ‘crack’ could be heard as the two met solidly.
The bandit staggered back with a suppressed grunt as Balker dropped back on all four legs. Silence, once again.

Michi Uchiha
10-25-2009, 02:55 PM
LOVE IT :hearts: very very outstanding

Sheriff
10-27-2009, 02:38 AM
LOVE IT :hearts: very very outstanding

Thanks a lot!:D So, you think I should continue it? It would really suck if I were to write without anyone reading.:cry:
And personally I need help with the arrangement of paragraphs, it makes the writing a mess.
+rep for making time to read it!

Sasori
10-27-2009, 02:57 AM
Paragraphs, you need them.

Haven't read it because of the terrible layout, try spacing it out a bit please, then I shall read it.

Sheriff
10-27-2009, 03:21 AM
Ok! I'll get on it now! Thanks!:D

Sheriff
10-29-2009, 03:35 AM
Finally overcame writer's block *whew!*:laugh:
Story update: Chapter Three!
Things are about to turn crazy.
A man strong enough to throw trees with ease...
King's soldiers on a mission to kill the boy...
An epic battle in the making...
Read and find out!


CHAPTER THREE (LOREN FROM THE LAND OF IMAGE)

What happened in the next second, Mark never knew. He looked up just to see Frenze suddenly appear directly before him, sword coming down incredibly fast.

He heard the air whistle sharply just before Frenze’s sword stopped centimeters from his face; he looked up and saw the man holding the centaur’s arm calmly.

Frenze chuckled, “You were able to catch up to my speed, I’m impressed”.

“You must be quiet stupid if you meant that crawl of yours,” the man replied tartly.

“Then what about this?!” Frenze shouted.

Mark blinked and saw the centaur’s hoof in front of his face, on top of it was the man’s foot.
Even though he hadn’t seen it, he knew what had just happened. Frenze had tried to kick him but was stopped by the man. All that, had happened in less than a second!

“Now Calix!” Frenze shouted.

The other centaur appeared behind the man, bringing his sword down on the man’s back.

There was a sudden heavy sound as Calix slid forcefully backwards on his hooves, clutching at his chest. The man’s other leg was up; Mark stared in amazement with a gaping mouth.

The centaur had just being kicked and nobody had seen it.

Unbelievable, Mark thought, looking up at the man. The speed at which these beings were moving broke every rule in Newton’s laws of motion.

“Impossible,” Frenze murmured; some fear reflecting in his eyes as he looked at the man.
Frenze suddenly wrenched his arm out of the man’s grip and dashed back, his sword leveled in front of him.

“Are you really a 6th year fighter?” Frenze demanded.

“I never said I was,” the man replied calmly, “it’s been a while since I last fought your commander and I think he has gotten very confident to think I’m at the same level”.

Mark had begun to calm down; he knew this man was here to save him. As bizarre as it was, he was grateful for that.

“Mark, can you stand?” the man asked, looking down at the boy.

“Yeah,” Mark said with a shaking voice, with still trembling knees he stood up.

“Good,” the man murmured, then turning back to Frenze he said, “As you said, my name is Loren, but I am not a 6th year fighter. My advice to you would be to call off this mission before you get yourselves killed, you could simply tell the king you couldn’t find the boy”.

“Why you……,” Frenze snarled, taking a step forward, “you are going to regret underestimating me!” he said.

Loren smiled, “Really?”

Once again Mark could feel the tension of an upcoming fight, turning he saw Calix had recovered from the blow and was standing ready to charge again.

“Yes, you are,” Frenze replied with a disturbing grin.

Oddly Mark found Frenze’s smile unsettling, so far as the fight was concerned Loren seemed to have the advantage. Yet there stood Frenze grinning confidently, Mark felt something wasn’t right.

He suddenly remembered the arrows that had almost hit him earlier; a bow was needed to fire those arrows. He looked at the unconscious centaurs sprawled on the ground; none of them had a bow.

This could only mean one thing.

Mark’s body moved of its own accord, he grabbed hold of the man’s shoulders and pushed him down. He heard the shredding of his shirt and knew the arrow had just missed flesh. It struck the ground a few meters away.

“Run Mark!” Loren shouted as he got up.

“You’re mine!” Frenze shouted and dashed straight at Loren.

Loren suddenly disappeared from sight, only to materialize behind a fear stricken Frenze.
The centaur raised his hind leg to kick the man but was too slow; he stumbled sideways from Loren’s sweeping kick and slammed hard into a tree. He slumped to the ground with a cry of pain, to stay there for a while.

This time, Mark heard the bows sing as they released their deadly loads.

With lightening speed Loren grabbed hold of a felled tree beside him and swung it in front of Mark, the arrows struck the tree harmlessly.

The sound of feet and hooves on the forest floor reached their ears.

“He had reinforcements,” Loren muttered, taking a step back as he looked wildly around.

Mark and Calix stood frozen, one out of shock towards the unbelievable things he was seeing and the other, out of fear of a man called Loren.

“I told you to run, Mark!” Loren shouted, glancing back at the boy. Mark blinked out of his trance at those words and turned to the trees behind him.

He ran towards them knowing that the sound of feet and hooves was in the opposite direction. What in the world was going on?

Behind the first line of trees he stopped and turned back, a pang of fear had suddenly struck him for Loren’s safety. But then again from the reaction showed by the two centaurs, he was certain Loren was really powerful, not to mention the fact that he had seen him in action with his own eyes.

Mark felt immobilized by an internal raging war, his mind demanding for logics and his heart shouting for what it felt was right. Go back and help him because he saved you or run away because he said so…

He heard a noise behind him and turned, two arrows were imbedded in a tree behind him.

That told him they knew where he was, which he found discomforting now that Loren wasn’t with him. He ducked instinctively as he heard the bows again; the arrows struck the tree once more; lower this time.

He took off; moving deeper into the trees and hoping it wasn’t all in vain.


Next: Part Two of Chapter Three.
Frenze's reinforcements; an unexpected factor for Loren.
How will he cope?

Upcoming events:Loren watched as men and centaurs ran out of the trees and into the clearing, forming a circle around him.

“Twelve,” he murmured to himself as he turned slowly to observe them all, “shouldn’t break a sweat”.

At the edge of the clearing, Frenze staggered to his feet, supporting himself with his sword.

He turned to see the surrounded Loren and smiled, “Be careful, he’s a 7th or 8th year fighter!” he said, stepping to the edge of the living circle.

“I told you not to underestimate me,” Frenze sneered as Loren turned to face him, “now you are going to regret it”.

Loren took a deep breath and increased the distance between his feet, he then spread his arms at his sides, bent his knees slightly and balled his fists while exhaling, “I didn’t underestimate you”.

He knew he would have to use it to end this quickly, even if it felt… unnecessary.

Frenze watched with interest as Loren dropped into a stance, he had heard a lot about that stance. The ‘flight of tokori’ as it was called. It was said to be a style of hand to hand combat used primarily in the absence of melee weapons; this stance was the first out of three levels.

“You plan to defeat us with ‘flight of tokori’s initial phase, my, you are confident,” Frenze scoffed.

“I think you’re the one underestimating me,” Loren replied with a smile, “especially since you really know nothing about this stance”.

Sheriff
11-15-2009, 05:01 PM
Loren watched as men and centaurs ran out of the trees and into the clearing, forming a circle around him.

“Twelve,” he murmured to himself as he turned slowly to observe them all, “shouldn’t break a sweat”.

At the edge of the clearing, Frenze staggered to his feet, supporting himself with his sword.
He turned to see the surrounded Loren and smiled, “Be careful, he’s a 7th or 8th year fighter!” he said, stepping to the edge of the living circle.

“I told you not to underestimate me,” Frenze sneered as Loren turned to face him, “now you are going to regret it”.

Loren took a deep breath and increased the distance between his feet, he then spread his arms at his sides, bent his knees slightly and balled his fists while exhaling, “I didn’t underestimate you”.

He knew he would have to use it to end this quickly, even if it felt… unnecessary.

Frenze watched with interest as Loren dropped into a stance, he had heard a lot about that stance. The ‘flight of tokori’ as it was called. It was said to be a style of hand to hand combat used primarily in the absence of melee weapons; this stance was the first out of three levels.

“You plan to defeat us with ‘flight of tokori’s initial phase, my, you are confident,” Frenze scoffed.

“I think you’re the one underestimating me,” Loren replied with a smile, “especially since you really know nothing about this stance”.

For a fleeting moment, the air around Loren seemed to suddenly push away from him.

The soldiers suddenly lunged forward, straight at Loren.

2nd year soldiers, Loren thought as he watched them come, comparing his speed against theirs felt like cheating. They were still downright amateurs.

The first one reached him, swinging his sword to his left. Loren’s right arm shot up and knocked the sword clearly out of the man’s hand and into the air. His arm stopped in the air and with lightening speed came crashing down on the man’s head.

The man fell to the ground forcefully as Loren shot an outstretched leg behind him at a centaur in midair. The centaur flew backward and crashed forcefully into the trees, never knowing what had hit him.

To his left, a man swung his sword down; Loren sidestepped him and watched the sword fall harmlessly past. Very slow…

Loren’s elbow connected with the man’s chest and sent him flying into another soldier. From the corner of his right eye, he saw a spear shooting straight for his head; he leaned back and watched it sail past his nose.

He caught hold of its wooden part and pushed back at the centaur holding it, it slipped through the centaur’s hands and slammed hard into his chest with such force that it snapped.

Still holding the broken spear, he swung it around him. It connected with two heads before breaking off again. Two swords rose up fast in front of him, shooting straight for his chest.

He ducked low and swung his leg in a wide arc, throwing the two men clearly off their feet and crashing to the ground headfirst.

Loren spun round to face the remaining three and jumped back, sliding to a stop some meters away from them.

Frenze felt his knees shake slightly, his eyes had stopped blinking. What is the meaning of this? he thought as he looked at the now visible Loren.

He had seen his soldiers charge simultaneously at the man, then for a split second the man had vanished from sight, all he had seen were his soldiers falling all over the place. To be able to counter ten simultaneous attacks with such ease…
Forget 8th year, Frenze thought, this guy is a 9th year. This was a speed his eyes couldn’t follow, a speed that challenged that of the legendary 11th year soldier; their commander.

“Let’s end this little game, Frenze,” Loren said, digging his feet into the ground, “because I’m getting bored”.



Next: Part Three of Chapter Three.
Loren has pulled through amazingly...
How will Mark cope...

Upcoming events:“Hello there,” the centaur said, reaching for the sword at his back. Mark recognized him as Calix, the fear struck centaur in the clearing.

“Y-You followed me…” Mark stammered.

“There’s no Loren to save you now,” Calix said as he saw the expression on Mark’s face. He pulled his sword slowly out of its scabbard, “Say, don’t you think it’s strange for someone’s death to bring life to another?” he said.

Mark swallowed hard as the centaur neared him with the raised sword; his mind racing frantically for what to do.

“I think it is,” the centaur continued, “especially when that death has been long foretold!”

Skystar
11-19-2009, 09:44 AM
Dude, where did you learn to write like that?
Read the prologue. IT was great!:nuts: Just loved the action scene.
SI's really got some nice fan-fics:nod:
BTW, could you slow down a bit and give me time to catch up?:D
Got a lot of fics to preoccupy me...:nuts:
Keep it up, man.:thumbsup:

Sheriff
12-07-2009, 11:59 AM
Thank a lot. Glad you like it.:D
I'm actually caught in a writer's block anyway...:laugh:
Thanks again.