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[Itachigirl2101993]

Chapter 1

"She's up ahead" someone said. "She's dead now" someone else said. A black hair girl with light blue highlight was getting chased by 2 guys. She wore a white Tee, blue jeans & black flip flops. "Get back here kid" the 1st person said. This girl's name is Raven. Her father is 1 of the Fire King's guards/protectors. Raven lived in the South Pole till her mother died & now lives with her brother Daren, her 2 guards Ken & John & her father in the Fire Nation. Raven jumped on to a tree branch & hid. Back at the palace, "Sir, we just got word" 1 of the guards said. "What is it?" the king asked. "A kid named Raven is being chased" said the guard. Raven's father looked up & looked at the king. "send Daren after her" the king told him. "Yes sir" the guard said leaving. Back 2 Raven, "Now where did that kid go?" the 2nd person asked. Raven watched them. "I bet she told the king everything. Let's get out of here & come back 4 her later" the 1st person said. The 2nd guy nodded & they both left. Raven jumped down & began walking 2wards the palace. About half way, she ran into someone & landed on the ground. Raven looked up & saw a black hair guy looking down at her. "Sis, u need 2 stop doing this" the guy said. "Daren, stop worrying about me. I can handle it" Raven said getting up. "Not if dad & the king has 2 do with it" he said. "You didn't" Raven said. "1 of the guards told him" Daren said. Rye said nothing. Daren & Raven started 2 walk back 2 the palace.

(Tell me what u guys think & I know it's stupid, but I was bored 2 death)

[colossusreese]

It's pretty good. Any idea of what you're going to name it?

[xEternalMelody]

Pretty cool.Keep updating,I would love to read it the updates.=D


If you want me to change the title,just ask,mkay?

[Itachigirl2101993]

It's pretty good. Any idea of what you're going to name it?

no, I need ideas

Pretty cool.Keep updating,I would love to read it the updates.=D


If you want me to change the title,just ask,mkay?

sure thing

[Itachigirl2101993]

Chapter 2

The next day Raven was walking around the fire kingdom. "Will they stop worrying about me" Raven thought. Raven walked passed a store. "Well, if it isn't Raven" someone said. This person has blond hair with light brown highlights, has a black tiger tee, black jeans & white flip flops. "Terra, nice 2 see u" Raven said looking around. "what's wrong?" Terra asked. "The king sent guards 2 watch me" Raven said. "I know" Terra said. Raven walked in the store & 2 fire guards walked by. "Let me guess, ur dad asked him 2 do it?" Terra asked. "Yeah, he keeps treating me like a baby" Rye said. "Wow, What r u doing 2night?" Terra asked her. "nothing" Raven said. "Would u like 2 see a movie with me & my friends?" she asked. "Sure" Raven told her. "Just 2 worn u, 1 of my friends is the fire lord's son" Terra said. Rye looked at her. "ur talking about Prince Jeff?" Rye asked. "Yep" Terra said. "K, I'll ask him" Rye said leaving. Raven was half way away from the store till a blond hair girl with gray highlights, a gray tee with a diamond, blue jeans & gray flip flops came running up 2 her. "Raven, help me plz" the girl said. "What's wrong Serena?" Raven asked. "I'll tell on the way 2 the palace"Serena said dragging her. Back at the palace; "I'm srry, but I can't do anything about that" the king said. The person left. "Father" Prince Jeff said. "In a min. son" the king told him. At that moment Serena & Raven comes in. The king, Raven's dad & Prince Jeff looked at them. "Well" Raven's dad said. "Yes Serena?" the king asked. "There's something u should know" Serena said. "Tell me later" the king told her. "Srry 2 bother u sir, but we have someone that tried 2 kill someone" a guard said. "Bring him in" the king said. 2 guards came in with the person. Raven's dad & the king looked at the person. Raven backed away. "U" the person said in a dark voice looking at Raven. Raven's father looks at her.

(srry about double posting)

[Rangi]

Its really gud i felt like reading even more

[Itachigirl2101993]

Chapter 3

5 min. later Raven found herself on the floor & the guy was on top of her. The king & Raven's dad watched them. The 2 guards were backing away from the fight. The guy pulled out a knife & cuts Raven's wrist & arm. "That's enough" the king yelled. The 2 guards grabed the guy & took him off of Raven. Serena walked up 2 her & helper her up. "u ok?" she asked. "Yeah" Raven said looking at the cuts. "Take him 2 a cell" the king ordered. The guards nodded & left with the guy. Prince Jeff walked up 2 them. "Let me look at it" he said. Raven showed him the cuts. Jeff touches them & they began 2 heal. "U can heal cuts?" Raven asked. "Yes I can" Jeff said. "Serena, what did u need 2 tell me?" the king asked. "Someone is planing 2 kill Raven. That's just the 1st attack on her" Serena said. Jeff & Raven looked at each others eyes. Raven's dad looked at Serena & then at Raven. That night Prince Jeff comes in Raven's room. "ready?" he asked. "Yep" Raven said. They left the palace.

[NarutoGX]

tat story wuz awesome i really like it i hope u can come up with more

[Rangi]

Omg keep on writing more i liked it

[Itachigirl2101993]

Chapter 4

"My king" someone said. "Yes?" the king asked. "u need 2 see something" the person said. Serena walks in2 the palace. "She's with Princes Jeff" Raven's father told her following the king. Serena walks up 2 Raven & Jeff. "What's up?" RYe asked. Serena looked at her & said nothing. "Is it about Terra?" Prince Jeff asked. Serena nodded. Raven & Jeff looked at each other. "Let's go" he said leaving. Raven & Serena followed him. 10 min. later they showed up at Terra's. Terra was sitting against a tree in the front of her house. Serena heard yelling inside the house. Right at that moment, the Fire king & Raven's dad showed up. Terra looked at the. "What's going on?" the king asked. Tera looked up at him & said nothing. Raven walked over 2 her & sat down. "T what's wrong?" Raven asked. "My parents" Terra said in a quiet/crying tone. "What about them?" Raven asked. At that moment they all hear a crash. "no" Terra said in an upset voice. The king & Raven's dad runs in the house. When they looked around, no one was in there. "where r they?" the king asked. "gone, far away from each other" Terra said in a mad tone. Prince Jeff looked at her leg. "may I ask how u got that mark on ur leg" Prince Jeff asked. "My dad did that" Terra said.

2 be continued............

[Dimetrius]

wow dis is good and i hate reading:laugh:

[Itachigirl2101993]

k guys I need ur ideas 4 a name 4 the fan fic, any 1 got any?

[Rangi]

ill start thinkin

[Itachigirl2101993]

Chapter 4 (part 2)

"what mark?" Raven asked. "This mark" Terra said showing it 2 her. "How did ur dad make that mark?" Jeff asked. "um........ about that" Terra said. The king looked at her. "Terra, we need 2 know what happened so we can help" the king said. "He got mad at my mom & began beating me up 4 no reason" Terra told him. "I remember u told me this" Raven said. "I remember 2, but this time he did it on my leg" Terra added. Somewhere out in the ocean; "Sir, ur daughter, what about her?" someone asked. "Don't worry about her, she'll be dead soon enough" Terra's dad said. "If u say so sir" the person said. Back at Terra's; A female came up 2 them. "Terra, sweetie r u ok?" the person asked. "mom" Terra said going over 2 her. The king looked at both of them. "I'm fine mom, where did dad go?" Terra asked. "he left the fire nation" Terra's mother said. Raven walked over 2 the king. "sir, can they stay near the palace?" Raven asked. "yes they can" the king said. "srry 2 interrup u guys, but u can stay near the palace if u want. A place is ready 4 u guys 2 stay in" the king said. Terra looked at her mother. "we'll like that" Terra's mother said.

(if u guys have any ideas 4 the title let me know plz)

[Itachigirl2101993]

Chapter 5

At the palace; "Sir, we just got word. Terra's father is heading for the South Pole" 1 of the king's guards said. "Keep me posted" the king said. The guard nodded. Somewhere in the Fire Kingdom; "comes back her brats" some 1 said. "T what did u do?" Raven asked. Some 1 got in front of Raven & she fell. 2 other guys grabbed her & brought her 2 the leader. "Raven" Terra said. The leader slapped Raven. A black hair boy wearing an fire nation uniform watched in the shadows. "Let her go" Serena called. The leader slapped Raven again & then looked at Serena. Back at the palace; "Sir, Raven & the others r in danger" a guard said. Prince Jeff, Raven's father & the king looked up. "well, lets go find them" the king said walking out. Back at somewhere in the kingdom; Raven was now on the ground bleeding & pinned. "Get off of her" Terra yelled. "Make me kid" the leader said. The 2 ppl picked up Raven by the neck. Raven tried 2 brake free, but got held tighter, at a point she couldn't breath. Raven looked at the ground. "I'll finish u off right now" the leader said grabbing her head. "That's enough" Matt said. "well if it isn't Matt" 1 of the ppl said. The leader slapped Raven harder & Raven spits out blood out of her mouth. "Drop the girl & step away from her" the king said. The 2 ppl threw her 2 the ground. Raven sat up trying 2 breath. Prince Jeff went up 2 her. The 3 ppl left. "Matt I need 2 talk 2 u" the king said. Matt nodded. Raven looked up at the king, spitting out blood & the king looked back at her. Raven's father went over 2 her. "dad" Raven began in a weak tone. "don't speak, u'll make it worse, let's head back 2 the palace" he said. the king, Jeff & Matt nodded. Matt picked up Raven & she passed out. The king began 2 walk back 2 the palace with Prince Jeff, Raven's dad & Matt carrying Raven.

[CM Punk]

See, I knew you could write a good Fan Fic!

[Itachigirl2101993]

See, I knew you could write a good Fan Fic!

hey, after reading urs gave me a good idea

[kitty kyoki]

more itachi-chan!!!

[Itachigirl2101993]

Chapter 6

In the middle of the night Raven woke up. Ken walked in her room. "what's up princess?" he asked. "It's nothing, I just thought I felt Terra's father's plans 2 attack the fire nation" Raven told him. "I think the king would like 2 hear this & ur father" Ken said. "where is he any ways?" Raven asked. "over at the the palace" Ken told her. John walks in. "ur father call, he wants u" he said. Raven nodded. "can u guys come?" Raven asked. John & Ken nodded. Some where out in the ocean; "sir, when r u planing 2 attack the South Pole?" some 1 asked Terra's dad. "now" he said. the guards took over the south pole. the water benders that lived in the South Pole went 2 the North Pole. Back at the palace; "so ur saying that he's planing 2 attack the 5 nation & rule them?" the king asked. Prince Jeff watched. Raven nodded. "sir, we just got informed, the South Pole has been taken over by u know who" a guard said. "Let the North Pole know, they're next" the king said. The guard nodded & left.

2 be continued..................

[kitty kyoki]

yay!!!

[Itachigirl2101993]

Chapter 7

At the Earth Kingdom; "Sir, we spotted something heading our way" some 1 said. "Let the Fire Nation know" the Earth King said. The person nodded & left. A black hair girl comes walking in. "Well, there's my princess" the king said. "Father, have u heard a word from Raven?" the girl asked. This girl wore a blue tee with a star on it, blue jeans & black flip flops. The Earth King shook his head. Back at the Fire Nation; Raven was talking with Terra & Serena. "we should let her know" Terra said. "I'm agreeing with Terra on this 1" Serena said. Price Jeff was listing. Raven sat next 2 him & puts her head on is shoulder. Guys, let's give her a break, she's been up all night" Jeff said. "But she needs..." Terra began. Raven looked at her. "I'll call her later" Raven said. "u better" Serena said. Prince Jeff looked at Serena & then kissed Raven. "U guys make a great couple" some 1 said. "Matt, get out of here" Terra said. "Hold on, I'm just making sure the Prince & Raven r ok" Matt said. Raven looked at him & said nothing. Somewhere in the ocean; "Sir, looks like the Earth King knows we're coming" a guard said. "Well then, they r going 2 fall" Terra's dad said.

[Itachigirl2101993]

Srry guys, but there's not going 2 be any new posts soon. Dad got fired & I'm moving so plz bare with me

[colossusreese]

Sorry to hear that. Hope everything works out for you. I'll try to help you think of a great name for this fic as a thanks for you writing it

[Itachigirl2101993]

Chapter 8

Back at the Earth Kingdom; "Raven, answer ur phone" the girl said. "Princess Lita, ur father is calling 4 u" a guard called. Lita walked up 2 her dad. "What?" Lita asked. "The Fire King is sending 4 ppl over here" he said. At that point Lita's phone rings. "Yeah?" Lita asked. "Hey, it's Jeff, listin, ur father knows that we're coming right?" Jeff asked. "Yes ho does & where's Raven?" Lita asked. "She's fine, she's with me & tell ur father we'll be there 2morrow" Jeff said hanging up. Lita closed her phone. "well?" he dad asked. "They'll be coming 2morrow" Lita said walking off. Back at the Fire Nation; "sir, what about Terra's dad?" the guard asked. Raven, Jeff, Serena & Terra watched.

2 be continued..................

[Itachigirl2101993]

Chapter 9

The next day Prince Jeff & the others headed 2 the Earth Kingdom. 10 fire nation guards followed. Some where in the ocean; Terra's dad was planing their attack on the southern air temple. "Sir, we have arrived" a guard said. "Let's go" Terra's dad said taking the map. Back at the Earth Kingdom; "Raven" Lita said as Raven, Terra, Serena, Prince Jeff & the 10 fire guards walked in. Raven didn't say a word. "Prince Jeff, whats up with her" the Earth King asked. "She didn't sleep last night & tired" Jeff said after giving Raven a kiss. "Make urselves home" the king said walking off. "we will" Terra said. Back at the fire nation; "sir, we got word from the Earth King & he says that they r safe & with him" a guard said. "thanx keep me posted" the fire king said. "sir, r u sure Raven & the others will help him?" Raven's father asked. "They'll call when they need help, don't worry Raven is with my son & 10 fire guards" the king said. Raven's Father nodded. In front of the palace at the Earth Kingdom; Raven pulled out her phone & called Daren. "sis what's wrong?" Daren asked. "how fast can u get here?" Raven asked. "I'm already here, dad sent me a week be4 u guys showed up" Daren said. "I need 2 talk 2 u" Raven said. "I'll be over when I get free" Daren told her hanging up. Prince Jeff walked up 2 her & sat down.

2 be continued..................

[Itachigirl2101993]

Chapter 10

At the northern Air Temple; "Take cover" a air bender said. Terra's dad throws 3 fire balls at the air temple. "get out" the leader of the air temple said. "not in ur life time" Terra's dad said killing him. At the Earth Kingdom; a little fight was going on. "shut up u f***ing b**ch" a kid said. "make me" another kids said. Raven, Lita, Prince Jeff & the earth King showed up & watched. the 1st kid punched the 2nd kid in the guts. The 2nd kid falls 2 the ground. "dad?" Lita asked. the king nodded. Lita & Raven went 2 the 1st kid, while Prince Jeff & the Earth King went over 2 the 2nd kid. At that moment the 1st kid kicked Raven. "u little brat" Raven said getting pissed off & beginning 2 glow. back at the northern air temple; "sir, u took over the south pole & southern air temple & now the northern air temple, what r u going 2 do now?" some 1 asked. "the Earth kingdom" Terra's dad said. back at the street at the earth kingdom; "Raven calm down" Prince Jeff said. Raven looked at him.

2 be continued.................. will Raven kill the kid? keep watchin