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Pixel
07-14-2008, 02:49 PM
Here's my new FanFic, it's called: Dont Breath a Word
Hope you like it! Alright, heres chapter one, Chapter one:

"shh...can you keep a secret?"

Sakura's eyes widened as Ino whispered the promiscuous story in her ear.
"Are you serious?!" Yelled Sakura after she was done.
"That's what everyone said what happened! It's unbelievable huh?" Ino said with a smirk on her face.
"Wait till i get my hands on-"
"Sakura you cant tell because it's a secret!" Ino quickly reminded her.
"I...but...that's not fair... cant i just-"
"No Sakura."
Sakura sighed and punched the brick wall. She saw Sasuke coming and ran to him. "Is it true?"
"What?" He said rolling his eyes.
"That you...and then you...and then she and...you know what i mean!"
Sasuke raised his eyebrows. "Wow that was such a compelling novel. I cant wait until i buy the hardcover edition." he said turning to walk away.
Sakura kicked him in his nuts and then grabbed his ear and twisted it. "Dont **** with me Uchiha. I'll beat the shit out of you!"
"I dont know what in the hell you are talking about Sakura!" He squealed from the pain from his personal area.
Sakura raised ehr hand to slap him. "Baka!" she yelled at him as Ino grabbed her hand and dragged her away.
"Run Sasuke!" yelled Ino.
"I can't!" he squealed still in pain.
"Then limp! Limp away! Be free! Run you dumb animal-"
"Ino i'm not Lassie!" he yelled limping away.
"Sorry!" she called. "Sakura calm down. I wasnt even at the good part yet!"
"The good part! Wait till i-"

lazyboy
07-15-2008, 02:37 PM
hah it was good and funny too keep going now

Pixel
07-15-2008, 02:40 PM
I'm to lazy right now, you know the feeling, right?

chryblossom
07-15-2008, 02:43 PM
lol, that was funny. Keep up the good work, and keep writing. I want to read more

Pixel
07-15-2008, 02:47 PM
I'll work on it then!

lazyboy
07-15-2008, 09:04 PM
I'm to lazy right now, you know the feeling, right?

yeah i know it all too well and woohoo i became tokubetsu 2 post ago!:nuts:

Pixel
07-16-2008, 05:59 AM
Sweet! and I became S class about 200 posts ago!

lazyboy
07-16-2008, 12:47 PM
Sweet! and I became S class about 200 posts ago!

i'm ltoo lazy to post so much though

Pixel
07-16-2008, 01:05 PM
Well, i go to football camp most day's that's why S-kun has more posts than me..

Mr. Drew
07-16-2008, 02:04 PM
heh pretty good I liked it

Pixel
07-16-2008, 02:07 PM
Yeh, thx, and chapter 2 is comeing soon!

lazyboy
07-16-2008, 06:39 PM
Yeh, thx, and chapter 2 is comeing soon!

still think it should come faster

Itachi
07-16-2008, 07:08 PM
I dont usually read fan fics due to the stupid ideas for them, but that was awesome, please continue.

chryblossom
07-16-2008, 07:54 PM
still think it should come faster

its taking a really long time, faster faster

Itachigirl2101993
07-16-2008, 08:17 PM
This is grreat That was funny what Sakura did 2 Sasuke. Even though I love Sasuke. :sharingan::chidori:

Pixel
07-17-2008, 02:29 PM
Ok, ok people, im busy right now!

lazyboy
07-19-2008, 01:58 PM
Ok, ok people, im busy right now!

with too many other things concentrate on this

Itachigirl2101993
07-19-2008, 04:49 PM
um...... k

Pixel
07-19-2008, 06:08 PM
with too many other things concentrate on this

Yeah, pretty much...

Itachigirl2101993
07-19-2008, 08:50 PM
K I think :chidori::fireballjutsu::sharingan:

Pixel
07-20-2008, 07:28 AM
K I think :chidori::fireballjutsu::sharingan:

Chapter 2 i'll post today, hopefully.